2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "the Full Moon and the Leaf"-
26 total reviews
Comment from Yusita
I can't get over the beautiful imagery here! "Full moon balanced on bare bough"... my mind's eye immediately pictured it. What a beautiful and creative description. This was a splendid piece!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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I can't get over the beautiful imagery here! "Full moon balanced on bare bough"... my mind's eye immediately pictured it. What a beautiful and creative description. This was a splendid piece!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Hola Marival. I just loved this Tanka. It is so very sensual and I loved the personification you used. Beautiful use of sensory words and presentation. UN abrazo mi amiga, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hola Marival. I just loved this Tanka. It is so very sensual and I loved the personification you used. Beautiful use of sensory words and presentation. UN abrazo mi amiga, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Hola, guapa,
Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Abrazos y besitos
Marival
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem Gypsy----and even though I am a morning guy, I think I could manage to stay awake for her! Although with my rapidly advancing years, I'd better take a nap just in case!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Another fine poem Gypsy----and even though I am a morning guy, I think I could manage to stay awake for her! Although with my rapidly advancing years, I'd better take a nap just in case!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JSD
Saucy artwork for your lovely poem. I presume it's a self portrait? Beautiful imagery as one so often expects from you. The first two lines are spectacular. Well done. x
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Saucy artwork for your lovely poem. I presume it's a self portrait? Beautiful imagery as one so often expects from you. The first two lines are spectacular. Well done. x
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. The dual picture were life up-lifting, they showed that life was up-lifting to say the least. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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What a beautiful tanka, Gypsy. The dual picture were life up-lifting, they showed that life was up-lifting to say the least. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Aryr
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This is a well done tanka the uses metaphor/personification well to describe the fall of a tree's last leaf.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Hi MariVal,
This is a well done tanka the uses metaphor/personification well to describe the fall of a tree's last leaf.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Merry Christmas to you too. (*÷*)
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most kindly welcome, MariVal
Joan
Comment from Carlos' girl
What a beautiful presentation first of all. I love the illustration and graphics. Well done. The poem is delicate, emotional and moving.
Nice work Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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What a beautiful presentation first of all. I love the illustration and graphics. Well done. The poem is delicate, emotional and moving.
Nice work Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Wendyanne
This is such a beautiful, well written little poem in tanka style. The imagery is wonderful, ie, "full moon balance on the bare bough." Your use of alliteration is very effective too. Truly lovely!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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This is such a beautiful, well written little poem in tanka style. The imagery is wonderful, ie, "full moon balance on the bare bough." Your use of alliteration is very effective too. Truly lovely!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Wendy
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
Very nicely worded and your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best for the weekend and I wish you a very happy and prosperous new year as well as a very merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Very nicely worded and your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best for the weekend and I wish you a very happy and prosperous new year as well as a very merry Christmas.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Merry Christmas to you too.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautifully seductive poem with us. It seduces us in at the beginning with the words you chose and captures us until the end. Wonderful job. You out do yourself with each poem you write.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you for sharing this beautifully seductive poem with us. It seduces us in at the beginning with the words you chose and captures us until the end. Wonderful job. You out do yourself with each poem you write.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Barbara
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs