Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Congratulations on your win, Jen. This was a very difficult prompt, and you did a masterful job with it. The rhyming is great, and the three lines form a complete sentence.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thanks a lot Paul.

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Congrats on your winning the 1-6-1 poem contest. You captured the one area where in searching for the truth, the one area where it may be found.
You certainly deserve the win.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023

Thank you so much. Jen

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Jen,

Congrats of your 1st place win in the 1-6-1 poem contest. Your short write perfectly captures the true conveyed in one's eyes when avoiding the truth as our eyes are truly windows to our inner thoughts.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023

Thanks Eugene. Much appreciated

Comment from Aiona

Excellent

What a cool poem! It fits the 1-6-1 syllable structure, and all three lines rhyme. It also tells a truism -- eyes are the key to the soul. I can see why it won the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023

Thank you so much. Jen

Comment from angel123

Exceptional

Thank you for sharing your enlightening poem. I like your presentation and your author notes, added more meaning to your message. Your poem speaks volumes. Your artwork choice is excellent! poem. Well written! Best wishes!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023

Thank you so much for reviewing and the wonderful stars.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Cleverly done! I like this! Good rhyming pattern and flow with a strong message very topical in today's climate. Well done here and good luck in the contest! Debbie

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023

Many thanks Debbie

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Eyes and lies, do they go hand and hand? If we see something with our own eyes, do the eyes investigate the situation? I know for certain if we could not see, it would be difficult to solve anything.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023

Thanks

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

This is one of the best 1-6-1's I've read. All three lines rhyme perfectly while conveying a very deep and true message: eyes rarely lie. I'd say someone has to really train themselves somehow so that their eyes don't scream out the truth.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023

Many thanks.