Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Well that was interesting, Doc! My surprise cameo left me stunned as one of my favorite old west characters has always been Annie Oakley. Perhaps you are a bit psychic, Sir?

Too funny. You are an interesting man, my friend!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thanks again for the compliments
and review Douglas.
Ricky

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Another intriguing and thought-provoking post by you, Ricky, filled with the usual clever and imaginative manipulation of words and imagery. Great stuff - well done!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thanks Dear and have a pleasant evening.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Austin Yu

Good

Wow! I love the extensive dialogue you wrote for this Christmas story! Sounds like Angela really is a devils child.. and I was a bit surprised by the ending, in which she got into a freak accident. Quite the plot twist... hahah. I loved it overall, how the dialogue seemed to flow consistently, and the elaborate descriptions you gave!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thanks Austin and enjoy this day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"