Lapland
Santa arrives suddenly.16 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Kace, your poem had me laughing...
wonder if I could get so lucky...LOL...
of course I would go and get a new roof...
so I guess that kind of leaves me out for
someone to fall through...I hope...
it's a sweet story told...I was reading part 2...
and saw where there was a part one...so I
came back to read part one first...
good for Santa...he found love at first sight...
I love your poem/story told my wonderful friend...
and your picture is perfect...very well written you...
love much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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HI Kace, your poem had me laughing...
wonder if I could get so lucky...LOL...
of course I would go and get a new roof...
so I guess that kind of leaves me out for
someone to fall through...I hope...
it's a sweet story told...I was reading part 2...
and saw where there was a part one...so I
came back to read part one first...
good for Santa...he found love at first sight...
I love your poem/story told my wonderful friend...
and your picture is perfect...very well written you...
love much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Everyone who reads both loves them. Glad you picked up on part 1. Love, Kace xx
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I love them as well...love xxoo
Comment from jim vecchio
I can't fault your style, story, or words. What I do wonder, though, is the spelling. Should it be: "Lapland?" or "Lap Land?" Aw, who cares! This was a fun piece of Loop Poetry.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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I can't fault your style, story, or words. What I do wonder, though, is the spelling. Should it be: "Lapland?" or "Lap Land?" Aw, who cares! This was a fun piece of Loop Poetry.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Hello Jim, Yes it is Lapland (where Santa landed.) Thanks so much for reading and have a Happy Christmas! Blessings, Kay xx
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The only other thing about Lapland I remember is that there was a science fiction movie about a hairy monster in Lapland. Forgot the name.
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I have just written 'A Happy Ending' poem because readers wanted the old lady to be immortal. Have changed the spelling to Lapland as you said.
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I hate to suggest any changes, especially with all my typos, but I knew you'd understand.
Comment from Lisasview
Hi Aussie,
I have been wondering why I have not had a post from you in my messages because I see you on my Fan list???
So, I checked your name and found this delightful fun loop poem... so perfect!!
Lisasview
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Hi Aussie,
I have been wondering why I have not had a post from you in my messages because I see you on my Fan list???
So, I checked your name and found this delightful fun loop poem... so perfect!!
Lisasview
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Hello Lisa, I haven't been writing much - we have been in a heatwave and I don't feel much like writing. Thanks for dropping in and have a Happy Christmas! Blessings, Kay xx
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Heat wave... wow!!
I too have not been writing much...Mainly reading and reviewing...
Lisa
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Just wrote A Happy Ending to Lapland.
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Great, I will read it...
Lisa
Comment from Wendyanne
Hahaha! This is a delightfully funny well written piece of loop poetry in which Santa suffers a bit of a mishap and falls through the ceiling!! I can picture the scene well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Hahaha! This is a delightfully funny well written piece of loop poetry in which Santa suffers a bit of a mishap and falls through the ceiling!! I can picture the scene well. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Hello there! Thanks for reading, so pleased you got a giggle. Happy Christmas. Kay xx
Comment from Navada
Welcome to a fellow Aussie from one who lives in Shepparton, Victoria! I really liked your loop poem and the story it told about the union of Santa and his new love. Very cute and a good deployment of a tricky form!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Welcome to a fellow Aussie from one who lives in Shepparton, Victoria! I really liked your loop poem and the story it told about the union of Santa and his new love. Very cute and a good deployment of a tricky form!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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G'Day new friend. Glad you liked my contest entry. Not easy to write, lots of fun. Regards, Kay.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
What a lovely outcome for Mr and Mrs Claus in your Loop poem entry K.
I have watched a lot of Christmas movies and still got a few to go. Your story made me smile, nice one.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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What a lovely outcome for Mr and Mrs Claus in your Loop poem entry K.
I have watched a lot of Christmas movies and still got a few to go. Your story made me smile, nice one.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 13-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Hello Valda. Me having fun with Santa. I hope your weather isn't too bad up there. Love, Kay.
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We are all good here. A bit of rain yesterday and overnight gave the gardens a drink.
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Thank goodness. Most of it hit the cape.
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Aussie /Kay. Boy she (meaning Grandma) was definitely in for a surprise, having Santa in her lap. Wow!!! She found herself in love. What a nice picture of Santa Clause. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Aussie /Kay. Boy she (meaning Grandma) was definitely in for a surprise, having Santa in her lap. Wow!!! She found herself in love. What a nice picture of Santa Clause. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hi Alie, Thanks for reading. glad you liked my sense of humor. Blessings, Kay xx
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You are so welcome, Kay.
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Are you thinking of moving to Canada or coming down under? :-)
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I was going to move to Canada but if I had the option I would move down there. Got any ideas? I gave up my nursing license when I was retiring.
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Well, we have a lot of Americans here now. Pity about your nursing license. We have an influx of foreigners, some waiting years. If you are feeling the pull to go back to Canada, follow your heart. How hard would it be to return? K xx
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Wow, you have lots of Americans! Perhaps I will return to Canada.
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I think you are lonely and need to put your roots down for the winter of your life. Why did you go to America? Very material and greedy country and it doesn't sit well with your giving nature.
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I was indeed ready for a chance/a change.
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Stop dancing on one foot and make a decision. Have you got friends in Canada?
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Friends and family there.
Comment from Wendy G
That's quite a different way of finding a partner! A fun and humorous loop poem flowing smoothly - and appropriate to the season. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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That's quite a different way of finding a partner! A fun and humorous loop poem flowing smoothly - and appropriate to the season. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hello Wendy, I was having fun with Santa. Thanks for reading and the good wishes. Love, Kay.
Comment from lyenochka
That's quite a story that I've never heard - about Santa who was immortal and his beloved who was not. You told this interesting story and how they were reunited in the difficult rhyming loop style. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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That's quite a story that I've never heard - about Santa who was immortal and his beloved who was not. You told this interesting story and how they were reunited in the difficult rhyming loop style. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hi Lena, I wanted to put Santa in a humorous situation! I could have gone on and on and made her immortal, would have been too long! Thank you for reading and your good wishes. Love, Kay xx
Comment from LJbutterfly
Haha! This is a humorous and imaginative loop poem that tells the story of how an old lady got her man and how Santa found a warm lap. Your creativity shines through. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Haha! This is a humorous and imaginative loop poem that tells the story of how an old lady got her man and how Santa found a warm lap. Your creativity shines through. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you for reading my friend. I was having fun.
I could have gone on but it was getting longer and longer! K xx
