Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. They showed that your words are oh so very true, but were true. Like kisses to wish you goodnight. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent and kind review. May you have a lovely day. blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 11-Dec-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This presentation and this poem are absolutely beautiful. This is an example of why I swear you are the Queen of Haiku. Nobody could write any better, and not only that present it any better.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Wow, thank you, Barbara, you are so sweet. I love the way you write, you are the Queen Story Teller. You are so good.

Thank you very much for your excellent and kind review. May you have a lovely day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

very cool imagery in this one!
the rays of the sun caressing the flowers
with good night kisses was great!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy Hug

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Oh my. You ooze serenity! What a thought! Sunrays as goodnight kisses!

I love to view the world through your poetic vision!

Congratulations on another beautiful haiku!

Karenina

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you, sister, it'salways good to hear from you (*÷*)

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.

Gypsy hugs

reply by karenina on 11-Dec-2023

Goodnight...as we approach midnight here!

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was a very romantic nature poem. The caress of the rays of the setting sun were like a last goodnight kiss. The flowers will sleep and wait for the tickle of the mornings light. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like your personification of those last twilight sunrays which are giving those "warm goodnight kisses" to the flowers. The plants must relish every bit of sun and warmth they can get during these winter months.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.

Love you

Marival

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I really like the concept of this piece - the wildflowers accepting a last embrace from the sunlight before it disappears at the end of the day. The connection and relationship is clear and is brought home beautifully in the satori. Lovely writing and gorgeous visual images to reinforce the atmosphere created by the words.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Your work is always beautifully presented and your wording is fantastic. I enjoyed it very much. I wish for you very happy week this coming week. Also, I wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Marry Christmas to you too. :)

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.

Gypsy hugs