Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Well they did the deed I suppose it is inevitable isn't it. Your story gets more interesting as you go along and you're very concise and clear writer too. Which I think is a rare trait and the blessing to you. Does it makes We're going to seem like it's real like it's hot could happen at any time and that's the mark of a good writer. Hope you have a great evening. Thanks again talk to you soon!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you Lea.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

It seems that Angela has got through a fair number of friends over the course of the last forty five chapters and isn't far off losing another one or two. It sounds as if William is worth it, though!
My head's awhirl with all the characters but the story is well told and it makes for enjoyable reading.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

William got out rather quickly. I sure it won't belong before everyone finds. I wouldn't taken his for Caz being out of his life until I heard it from her. I think she too trusting. I eager to hear what happens in the next episode.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you Beth.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Goodness, I could feel the tension of that rush, thinking Michelle was going to show up any minute. Angela is well and truly smitten isn't she? And giving up her job as well, putting all her eggs in one basket and doomed to failure. I'm not sure if you want me to point out errors, Jacob, so let me know if it's useful . But: The way he made me feel on New Year's Eve (I would n't put 'how' in there); wait for the girls to come home (no apostrophe with (girls). Thanks for sharing another enjoyable chapter. Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you Debbie. Yes that?s absolutely fine for you to point out errors. Sometimes I read a piece of my work over and over again and I still don?t spot them, so I really appreciate it.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A quick turnaround for Angela here to cover up her tracks and it is a pity she is so afraid of what here friends think. Michelle is quick controlling and I don't think I would get along with her! Ha ha ha, another fine realistic chapter Jacob, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you Dolly.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written, chapter for your book. I was engaged the whole way through as I listened to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. And I wish you the very best with your book when and if you get it published. Have a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Well, Angela you really messed things up. I am wondering how she met Paul, and why doesn't he know Rebecca isn't his. I can't wait to read more.

snuggle up next to William, (snuggle beside William)

I should've held off jumping into bed with William like that. (should have thought of this a while ago.)

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you Barbara.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Is there anyone more shortsighted and stupid than a smitten woman? I doubt it. She's quit her job for a "tumble" with William. She's acting like a Junior High teen trying to get him up and out and disguise his "scent" with hairspray. In short, she does not have the good sense to see that William is anything but a man who deserves this emotion:

"I haven't felt like this about any boy before.

Is this drug dealer worth it? Not a chance!

Karenina

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023

Thank you Karenina.

reply by karenina on 10-Dec-2023

Super good. I like the action introduced...