2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 128 "Fanning His Feathers"x
10 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Yes, in the animal
kingdom, the males are more beautiful and colorful. I prefer the human form.
Thanks for your well-written peahen/peacock poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Gypsy,
Yes, in the animal
kingdom, the males are more beautiful and colorful. I prefer the human form.
Thanks for your well-written peahen/peacock poem.
Mark
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very flamboyant are male peacocks. They seem to know what their colorful feathers do. They even take my breath away. A beautiful poem about a spectacular bird. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Very flamboyant are male peacocks. They seem to know what their colorful feathers do. They even take my breath away. A beautiful poem about a spectacular bird. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. Peacocks are a special breed of birds. They showed that the birds as one with rest of the flock. Peacocks are on parade. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. Peacocks are a special breed of birds. They showed that the birds as one with rest of the flock. Peacocks are on parade. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Whether a male peacock or human, they try to strut their feathers to attract the female.
Well done both in imagery and imagination.
i enjoyed the read.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Whether a male peacock or human, they try to strut their feathers to attract the female.
Well done both in imagery and imagination.
i enjoyed the read.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I took this poem a different way than was intended. I got to thinking about how often women fan a man's feathers, i.e., his ego, then I wondered how often a man fan a woman's ego. I have a feeling men's egos get fanned a lot more.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I took this poem a different way than was intended. I got to thinking about how often women fan a man's feathers, i.e., his ego, then I wondered how often a man fan a woman's ego. I have a feeling men's egos get fanned a lot more.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
featherbutts are interesting birds...
great haiku about them and their mating season
good imagery and smooth flow - the alliteration worked very well
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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featherbutts are interesting birds...
great haiku about them and their mating season
good imagery and smooth flow - the alliteration worked very well
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed Well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this with me and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed Well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this with me and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
Smile...
It's nice that the male of the species is tasked (blessed?) with preening and strutting and wooing the female!
Poetic justice!
Literally!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Smile...
It's nice that the male of the species is tasked (blessed?) with preening and strutting and wooing the female!
Poetic justice!
Literally!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Some men act like that...
Thank you very much, sister. I hope you had a wonderful weekend. Mine was too short.
Thank you very much for taking the time and for being so kind.
Love you
Marival
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All weekends are too short!
Comment from Navada
Doesn't this sum up so much about human nature as well as avian? We are not so far evolved as we like to think. As ever, you've incorporated stunning imagery, both visual and written, and really helped us to see the broader metaphor within the seduction dance of the peacock. Thanks for the share!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Doesn't this sum up so much about human nature as well as avian? We are not so far evolved as we like to think. As ever, you've incorporated stunning imagery, both visual and written, and really helped us to see the broader metaphor within the seduction dance of the peacock. Thanks for the share!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Those peacocks sure know how to get the attention of the peahens by "fanning their feathers." They do like being on parade for the "hot hens" and only they can see the hotness as we are distracted by the peacocks.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Those peacocks sure know how to get the attention of the peahens by "fanning their feathers." They do like being on parade for the "hot hens" and only they can see the hotness as we are distracted by the peacocks.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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LoL men can be funny that way.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival