Me. Her. Him
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Comment from karenina
Poor Angela... If it wasn't for bad judgement she wouldn't have any at all!
Let's see He is a drug dealer, a cad, a two-timer, and he's playing with all of her emotions--not to mention throwing Caz to the curb.
What could go wrong?
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Poor Angela... If it wasn't for bad judgement she wouldn't have any at all!
Let's see He is a drug dealer, a cad, a two-timer, and he's playing with all of her emotions--not to mention throwing Caz to the curb.
What could go wrong?
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your very helpful background is now taking over your post but, well done, for doing this because it's always so helpful! I don't trust that William as far as I could throw him. And Angela is just so gullible. Oh dear, she's fallen completely hasn't she? An excellent hook with your ending. Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Your very helpful background is now taking over your post but, well done, for doing this because it's always so helpful! I don't trust that William as far as I could throw him. And Angela is just so gullible. Oh dear, she's fallen completely hasn't she? An excellent hook with your ending. Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere! Debbie
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Well, there's a happening a now. They're going to be together interesting. I want to whose lids going to flip this time. Very good piece of writing! An interesting story with secrets to reveal! I see no issues with grammar sentence structure or punctuation. I think it's another find chapter entry I hope you have an amazing evening!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Well, there's a happening a now. They're going to be together interesting. I want to whose lids going to flip this time. Very good piece of writing! An interesting story with secrets to reveal! I see no issues with grammar sentence structure or punctuation. I think it's another find chapter entry I hope you have an amazing evening!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh Angela, a gigantic mistake. How could you? You've had all sorts of warning signals and ignored all of them. I can't wait to see what happens next.
didn't she say that she had no one else to stay with, (you can omit 'that')
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Oh Angela, a gigantic mistake. How could you? You've had all sorts of warning signals and ignored all of them. I can't wait to see what happens next.
didn't she say that she had no one else to stay with, (you can omit 'that')
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, the cat is out of the bag now Jacob and Angela will have to face the music. Betrayal is one of those things that leaves a nasty taste and ends friendships, we will see what happens, another fine chapter, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Oh dear, the cat is out of the bag now Jacob and Angela will have to face the music. Betrayal is one of those things that leaves a nasty taste and ends friendships, we will see what happens, another fine chapter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from BethShelby
She is being a little hasty. Is she planning to move in with him. He didn't say he had kicked Caz out. For all I know he might have been liveing in her place. I'm wondering if Angela ever put the money into the bank for her course which I wondering if she is really going to take the course. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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She is being a little hasty. Is she planning to move in with him. He didn't say he had kicked Caz out. For all I know he might have been liveing in her place. I'm wondering if Angela ever put the money into the bank for her course which I wondering if she is really going to take the course. Nicely written.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth and thank you for the six stars as well.
Comment from patcelaw
This is another well written chapter of your book, and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and with your book. I also wish you a merry very merry Christmas and a happy and blessed new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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This is another well written chapter of your book, and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and with your book. I also wish you a merry very merry Christmas and a happy and blessed new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Thank you.