Dancing under the moon
A night with the one you love.37 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
You have been inspired to write a well written poem. It is clear and concise. I see no mistakes found. Excellent work! Nice. Thank you for sharing! It's beautifully written.
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You have been inspired to write a well written poem. It is clear and concise. I see no mistakes found. Excellent work! Nice. Thank you for sharing! It's beautifully written.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
Comment from bob cullen
First, it was wooing under the cotton tree now it's dancing under the moon. Willie, words flow rhythmically for you and they present pictures of contentment and peace. Is your book, 'Through The Mist' available in Australia, or on-line. Or can we strike a deal via the net. Either a swap deal, my novel, 'The Ultimate Betrayal,' for a copy or I can pay cash. I love the idea of writer's supporting fellow writer's.
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First, it was wooing under the cotton tree now it's dancing under the moon. Willie, words flow rhythmically for you and they present pictures of contentment and peace. Is your book, 'Through The Mist' available in Australia, or on-line. Or can we strike a deal via the net. Either a swap deal, my novel, 'The Ultimate Betrayal,' for a copy or I can pay cash. I love the idea of writer's supporting fellow writer's.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
Very well done! I happen to love Glen Miller and love love even more, so that's a great combination! One small concern, which won't hurt you as you are recognized and have "all time best" but one writer once cautioned me not to leave too much space in the box below the writing, so I'm just passing on that tip.
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Very well done! I happen to love Glen Miller and love love even more, so that's a great combination! One small concern, which won't hurt you as you are recognized and have "all time best" but one writer once cautioned me not to leave too much space in the box below the writing, so I'm just passing on that tip.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from Aussie
No, I couldn't imagine a more romantic night. Two people becoming one. Swaying to the music on the dance floor. No one else exists, you and your love meld with the music. Well done Willie.
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No, I couldn't imagine a more romantic night. Two people becoming one. Swaying to the music on the dance floor. No one else exists, you and your love meld with the music. Well done Willie.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from Begin Again
I loved a lot of the big band era songs though they were before my time, but my favorite was In The Mood. Even had it played at my wedding umpteen years ago. Beautiful picture to fit the poem.
Smiles, Carol
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I loved a lot of the big band era songs though they were before my time, but my favorite was In The Mood. Even had it played at my wedding umpteen years ago. Beautiful picture to fit the poem.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from gramalot8
I read this just after reading the shade of the cottonwood tree lovers. I loved it as it seemed s continuation of a day of love between the two of them . From under the tree to under the moon. Loved it! Thanks again for sharing their love with us.
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I read this just after reading the shade of the cottonwood tree lovers. I loved it as it seemed s continuation of a day of love between the two of them . From under the tree to under the moon. Loved it! Thanks again for sharing their love with us.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie,
This romantic poem goes well with the romantic artwork It speaks of mutual love and the power of love, music and dance.
I agree that Ole Blue Eyes is great music to dance too.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
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Hi Willie,
This romantic poem goes well with the romantic artwork It speaks of mutual love and the power of love, music and dance.
I agree that Ole Blue Eyes is great music to dance too.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
What a great image you project with dancing under the moon! You have the perfect setting, with the right music, and dancing with the one you love. Nice poem Willie!
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What a great image you project with dancing under the moon! You have the perfect setting, with the right music, and dancing with the one you love. Nice poem Willie!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from Bobby Jo
very romantic, as you listen to the rhythm that helps you keep the rhythm of love language. Im impressed and want to read more of your cowboy poems
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very romantic, as you listen to the rhythm that helps you keep the rhythm of love language. Im impressed and want to read more of your cowboy poems
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I like this poem. It's a great love story. The picture goes nicely wuthering words. I like the words : dancing under the moon. Very well written. Great job
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I like this poem. It's a great love story. The picture goes nicely wuthering words. I like the words : dancing under the moon. Very well written. Great job
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
