Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Nice twist. I enjoyed your version. Good luck on the contest. :-)

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thank you for your review. It is greatly appreciated.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 09-Dec-2023

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Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I am sure some will have gotten a rise from this piece of poetic words; however, I found it rather difficult to read for the font being so small. It would do you well to edit and make the font larger, say size 18+

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

I love the twist you composed based on the popular song. This is hilarious. Well paced and well rhymed. Merry Christmas to you and all that still believe. Leave some milk and cookies.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it. Milk and cookies for sure!

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

This is very cute and well-thought out. I think this is a definite contender for the Humorous Christmas Poem Contest.

You did forget to rhyme so...ha! Made you check. Yeh, I'm funny.
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 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023

Thank you for your review and the humor you included.