Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was a beautiful image. Very seductive and sensuous but not done in a Lusby way. This was a mood and not an act. Probably makes no sense but it's the only way I can explain it. Gretchen

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from karenina

Excellent

So, let's admit it. I'd give a lot of money (if I had any) to enjoy one day looking just like that! (Okay, I've indulged in that fantasy, let's move on....)
You do set the stage and I'm blessed with the vision you create with your words and presentation. Gogyohka, hmmm? I like that it gives an open-ended "as brief as possible" rule. Mostly? I think your verse is dreamlike and full of spirit!

Karenina

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023

I love gogyohka because it's a lot like tanka without any rules, other than the 5 lines rule.

Thank you, little sister. I love your reviews. Have a wonderful weekend!

Love,
Marival

reply by karenina on 09-Dec-2023

You too, Marival!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This presentation is absolutely gorgeous. The colors are perfect and the color combinations you used in the poem are wonderful too. Well, so are the words. LOL The poem was fun and lively. Thank you for the presentation.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023

Barbara

Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

like the colourful imagery of sunset dancing
smooth flow of words waving through...

nice one!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023

Shelley

Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Pinterest has great Pictures. Your writing moves as her dress does. You have a very good flow. Ever since Autumn started you have been awash in riotous color. I bet as a kid you insisted on using every color in your 64 color crayon box. :-) Karen

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023

Karen

Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You make this gypsy's skirt very active with "rising, surging swelling in the breeze" and even describe it as the movements are "dangerously" affecting the viewers. Lovely pictures!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023

Thank you, big sister. I like the picture and it made me think of gypsies. I love them.
May you have a wonderful night.

Love
Marival

reply by lyenochka on 07-Dec-2023

You, too! 💖💞🎵