Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the double meaning of the satori with the sun rising warm memories
also like the near rhyme you snuck in with rise/horizon - nice.
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023

shelley,

sometimes i rhyme unintationally

Thank you for taking the time to review my poem. I appreciate your kindness.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

GBR,

Do like your connections with sun, aflame, and warm. The young-looking person gazes out on the distant horizon as she ponders the mysteries of her life.

Good use of artwork and colors to pair with your contest entry.

Mark

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023

Thank you for taking the time to review my poem. I appreciate your kindness. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Clever... War memories morph to warm memories with the "m" and "s" placement...

The net result was a hunger for peace!
Tis the season...

Perhaps this year?

Karenina

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023

I hope so, we need inner peace and world peace. I hope our country finds a middle ground between Republicans and Democrats; hopefully, trump will move to a faraway island away from presidency. I hope trump supporters realize who Trum is and come to their senses.

Thank you, little sister. I appreciate your kind reviews and loving soul.

Love,
marival

reply by karenina on 08-Dec-2023

We need a fresh new crop of leaders...

Those who are not so old they seem to have no conception of the precipice the world is upon!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's lovely to start out the day with "warm memories" reflecting the warmth of the sun. Speaking of which, we haven't seen the sun in a week. Lol. Lovely 5-7-5 poem. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2023

Thank you, Big Sister, I appreciate your good wishes and excellent review. Always so insigtful (*-*) Have a wonderful day.

gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Another breathtaking poem. Unfortunately, I am completely out of sixes. Just know if I had another one it would be yours. A beautiful poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023

Gretchen

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. This was a wonderful haiku. I loved the picture because it showed the beauty of the sunrise and great memories. Very well done and it greatly showed that it was enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023

Aryr

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 07-Dec-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I'm sure I mentioned before that sunrise is my favorite time of day. It's beautiful and peaceful as the birds wake up. You captured that in this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023

Barbara

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice 575 for the contest I wish you the very best in the contest. I hope you will have a wonderful day and a good rest of the week. God bless and have a good merry Christmas.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs