Freedom for Humanity
Peace for all of us.3 total reviews
Comment from RFL
The theme of freedom is so timely. I can see how much thought you put into your poem. If so many of us feel so deeply about freedom and peace, why is the world in such a challenging place? Best regards, RFL
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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The theme of freedom is so timely. I can see how much thought you put into your poem. If so many of us feel so deeply about freedom and peace, why is the world in such a challenging place? Best regards, RFL
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from patcelaw
Very nicely done for the repeating contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I also want to wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Very nicely done for the repeating contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I also want to wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you and the same to you too!🙂❤️
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a very good and worthwhile post, and honors The Lord. I suggest just tightening some lines a little, such as: "All the freedom we have
Is to be cherished as Jesus Christ's sacrifices grants us peace". You could mend the other lines with a slight change of wording to allow it to flow smoother.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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This was a very good and worthwhile post, and honors The Lord. I suggest just tightening some lines a little, such as: "All the freedom we have
Is to be cherished as Jesus Christ's sacrifices grants us peace". You could mend the other lines with a slight change of wording to allow it to flow smoother.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you!
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Thank you for writing!
