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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have been to many seashores but never to Point Reyes. I googled it. It's gorgeous. I can see why you wrote this beautiful poem about it. Thank you for sharing this presentation with us.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Barbara

    When I lived in Northern California near San Francisco, I went to Point Reyes and other beaches all the time. Point Reyes was my favorite.

    Thank you very much.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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what and where is point reyes?

way cool pic - i like the image of an ocean full of stars...

nice haiku with smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Point Reyes is a national seashore near San Francisco. I'll add it to my notes. It's a gorgeous beach and town. When I lived in Northern California I went there all the time.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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What a lovely image this haiku presented. An ocean full of stars was such a magical line. You definitely know your way around a haiku. Another wonderful offering. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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What an idyllic scene, and not only that but describing beautifully in word pictures with an expanded narrative in a most highly descriptive way, well done Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 05-Dec-2023
    Well done
Comment from lyenochka
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I have heard lots about how beautiful Point Reyes is. I can imagine that it looks like an "ocean full of stars" as the waters reflect the star-studded sky . A lovely summer haiku!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    When I lived in Northern California, I used to drive to San Francisco and all the beaches around there. They were so beautiful. Point Reyes was my favorite. I have a lot of fond memories. I can still smell the eucalyptus trees and sea. I hope u can see it again one day. There are beaches near where I live but I don't own a car anymore so I have to go along with my daughter. It's different now. I'm so scared of falling. I used to be fearless and had a real free spirit. You can Google point Reyes lighthouse and olema... a small town in point Reyes. We used to camp there when my kids were teenagers.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival