Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

You're right about this one. I'm attracted, but just can't. You're attracted, but just won't. What's wrong with us? Are we nuts? A great way to voice this sentiment between two people. Good luck.

Kiwi

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023

Thank you so much!! You words speak to the sentiment I was trying to present. It always feels great when something we write is viewed favorably.

Thanks again.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Free verse is hard to get right but your economy of language and style works very well here. I like the ideas you convey and the linear form of the verse. Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023

Thank you very much. I have not been writing much for a while but I am trying to come back.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed the sentiments here as the best relationships are the slow burning ones that take time to ignite with passion, a fine free-write for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023

Thank you, Dolly. I tried to present that inevitable conflict that occurs in relationships. And I hopefully, it also presents that there are times people can choose friendship