2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from aryr
This was a brilliant haiku, Gypsy. The first picture was of a lovely young woman with a bee bonnet and the second was of the delightful marigold. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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This was a brilliant haiku, Gypsy. The first picture was of a lovely young woman with a bee bonnet and the second was of the delightful marigold. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Thos was such a power poem. The colors and dramatic moments helped with that. Fiery burning sun. Break of day. It is a moment that happens but once . Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thos was such a power poem. The colors and dramatic moments helped with that. Fiery burning sun. Break of day. It is a moment that happens but once . Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Many flowers brighten and glow with the sun, as do many women, well some men do too, but let's forget them right now. LOL Thank you for sharing, again, your poetic talents with us.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Many flowers brighten and glow with the sun, as do many women, well some men do too, but let's forget them right now. LOL Thank you for sharing, again, your poetic talents with us.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Barbara
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool imagery! i like the idea of a flower rising with the sun burning for the day...
good haiku with smooth flow...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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cool imagery! i like the idea of a flower rising with the sun burning for the day...
good haiku with smooth flow...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
A gorgeous presentation here that complements your poetic well. The words alone create a bright morning full of flaming colour that is quite stunning.
Very nicely written and thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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A gorgeous presentation here that complements your poetic well. The words alone create a bright morning full of flaming colour that is quite stunning.
Very nicely written and thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, Gloria. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I wonder if it is the marigold that is rising at the break of dawn. Marigolds would welcome the heat of the noonday sun. And the colors make them look "aflame." Your first line reminded me of Proverbs 31 about the perfect woman who does all kinds of work all day long.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I wonder if it is the marigold that is rising at the break of dawn. Marigolds would welcome the heat of the noonday sun. And the colors make them look "aflame." Your first line reminded me of Proverbs 31 about the perfect woman who does all kinds of work all day long.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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The perfect woman... sounds hard. LoL I rather be imperfect
.Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival