Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Buddy"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from Paul Manton
Well, super enigmatic with the rhetorical question as a cliffhanger! A clever stylistic device using the third person who knows all about the 'killer' - that adds a significant amount of menace to the story.
The warnings you gave at the beginning weren't necessary this time; I was expecting something lurid or gory - or both! But it sounds like the body count might rack up soon, so I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter.
Paul
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Well, super enigmatic with the rhetorical question as a cliffhanger! A clever stylistic device using the third person who knows all about the 'killer' - that adds a significant amount of menace to the story.
The warnings you gave at the beginning weren't necessary this time; I was expecting something lurid or gory - or both! But it sounds like the body count might rack up soon, so I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter.
Paul
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your notes and encouragement. I thought I had to put the warning for the entire book. If its for each chapter, I will amend that .
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Welcome, Eileen.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Is buddy our killer I wonder? Hmm the story deepens and gets creepier with each read! Well if he's the serial killer then I'm a box of crackers. Factor as you go I see no issues with grammar sentence structure or subject matter. It's a great entry good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Is buddy our killer I wonder? Hmm the story deepens and gets creepier with each read! Well if he's the serial killer then I'm a box of crackers. Factor as you go I see no issues with grammar sentence structure or subject matter. It's a great entry good luck!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much! From a great writer like you - it means the world!