Seeking Souls
Everyone needs God's love.17 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
What a beautiful and timely message woven into the magic of this rhyme and composition Tina.
Lord... we do need you now!
And in saying that, souls such as yourself in full reflection and spreading the positivity in the truth of simplicity of just how easy it is to impart joy in the gift in giving, of being of service within the attitude of love is the key to a much brighter life.
A truly stunning presentation Tina!
With our thoughts we create...
a reflection of our Lord.
Warm regards,
James
******Star Exceptional!!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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What a beautiful and timely message woven into the magic of this rhyme and composition Tina.
Lord... we do need you now!
And in saying that, souls such as yourself in full reflection and spreading the positivity in the truth of simplicity of just how easy it is to impart joy in the gift in giving, of being of service within the attitude of love is the key to a much brighter life.
A truly stunning presentation Tina!
With our thoughts we create...
a reflection of our Lord.
Warm regards,
James
******Star Exceptional!!!!!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your exuberant review. It made me smile!
Tina
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Smiling's good... right!:)
Comment from Douglas Goff
True dat! It is too late to chose Jesus once they are tossing dirt on your coffin.
Well worded Truth:
Let's tell anew, so souls will live,
that only God, true joy can give.
Nice work Tina!
D
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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True dat! It is too late to chose Jesus once they are tossing dirt on your coffin.
Well worded Truth:
Let's tell anew, so souls will live,
that only God, true joy can give.
Nice work Tina!
D
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Thanks, D! Someday, it'll be too late to tell someone. It just hurts my heart!
Comment from Sally Law
Virtual six for this gospel laden poem. The world can't get enough good news and the gift of salvation in Christ in these end times is needed more than ever. You feel as I do. I think. His coming is soon. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Virtual six for this gospel laden poem. The world can't get enough good news and the gift of salvation in Christ in these end times is needed more than ever. You feel as I do. I think. His coming is soon. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Aw, thanks, Sally. I responded dedication to this a few days ago, but maybe it didn't go through? Just in case...We do feel the same. Time is short.
Bless you, sweet soul sis in Christ!
Comment from Daylily
Amen, Tina. Trusting in the love and grace of God brings a peace that is beyond explaining. I hope, this Christmas season, the world will start turning from all its destructive ways and depend on the Lord for the soothing feelings unsettled souls crave. Blessings to you and yours, Lily
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Amen, Tina. Trusting in the love and grace of God brings a peace that is beyond explaining. I hope, this Christmas season, the world will start turning from all its destructive ways and depend on the Lord for the soothing feelings unsettled souls crave. Blessings to you and yours, Lily
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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What a beautiful summary of my thoughts:) Thanks for this message and review! If only the world would turn a new direction!
Comment from jim vecchio
I am so thankful Christ saved me when He did. I would be dead now, surely. Thank you for honoring Him in this poem with your important words. The world needs this message!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I am so thankful Christ saved me when He did. I would be dead now, surely. Thank you for honoring Him in this poem with your important words. The world needs this message!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thanks, Jim:) The world definitely needs God. We all do!
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I am glad I'm here praising your words rather than in torment regretting them!
Comment from Janis M.
I enjoyed the partial repetition carried through each stanza that built on the concept of the previous one to show a continuous progression of thought. You paid close attention to meter as it stays consistent throughout.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I enjoyed the partial repetition carried through each stanza that built on the concept of the previous one to show a continuous progression of thought. You paid close attention to meter as it stays consistent throughout.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Janis:) I appreciate your review and summary!
Tina
Comment from Yusita
You gave a whole sermon in this short poem! A splendid piece. Each line was a build up and foundation for the next while being filled with deep meaning, and every word was important and purposeful. A beautiful poem that reminds us what our purpose in life should be.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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You gave a whole sermon in this short poem! A splendid piece. Each line was a build up and foundation for the next while being filled with deep meaning, and every word was important and purposeful. A beautiful poem that reminds us what our purpose in life should be.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much for telling me your thoughts. I so appreciate the kind review!
Tina
Comment from Wendyanne
This is an interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry in which your faith and trust in God and Jesus is so apparent. I agree that the world is a very scary place at the moment and perhaps believing in God may help us to deal with it
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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This is an interesting and thought-provoking piece of poetry in which your faith and trust in God and Jesus is so apparent. I agree that the world is a very scary place at the moment and perhaps believing in God may help us to deal with it
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Wendy, my faith is more real and solid than the world, only because God is. Its hard to express but you are right, believing in God will help us all deal! Thank you for your thoughts:)
Tina
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the repetition from one line to the next verse.
-You do a good job showing how we learn and grow.
-We learn to care for others.
-I like the message about telling anew
and the concluding couplet.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the repetition from one line to the next verse.
-You do a good job showing how we learn and grow.
-We learn to care for others.
-I like the message about telling anew
and the concluding couplet.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Pam. What a thorough and kind itemized review!
Tina
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You are very welcome, Tina. I got the idea for the format of my reviews from adewpearl (Brooke). I don't know if you remember her or not.
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I don't remember her, but it makes me want to do something similar since I like getting such thorough reviews myself.
Tina
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It works for me and it helps to keep things organized.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Part of being a child of God is to spread to word to everybody. I know I fall short of this mission. Thank you for sharing this gentle reminder so we can all be more diligent about spreading God's word.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Part of being a child of God is to spread to word to everybody. I know I fall short of this mission. Thank you for sharing this gentle reminder so we can all be more diligent about spreading God's word.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I fall short often, also! Yes, as His children we must spread the word:)
Thank you for reading!
Tina
