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Me. Her. Him

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A hidden past, a devastating truth.

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Comment from karenina
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Whoops. I may have read these out of order. Surely it was clear William was dealing drugs in the last chapter. Angela is playing with fire, a bit.
The spark is set, and I expect a right hot flame to be rising in the near chapters!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Thank you Karenina.
reply by karenina on 05-Dec-2023
    Always...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I went back to make sure I wasn't reading anything out of order, again. Yes, Michelle was right about Caz and William. Angela, you should have stayed away from them. I am liking this backstory.

If they weren't together then I wouldn't feel so guilty about . . . (comma needed after, 'together')

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
    Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Janis M.
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Williams character continues to grow more interesting. The dialogue between Caz and Angela is also intriguing. I wonder what Angela thought of when Caz made that comment about their intimacy everyday. I know for me if I had ever heard my husbands ex mention something like that when I was interested in him, my stomach would probably be forcing its way back up my throat.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
    Thank you Janis.
Comment from BethShelby
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The drug dealing bit is a surprise but when he first introduced he had a bad boy image. Maybe not that information is out there, I would think Angela would be quite so interesting but we do at some she dates him for while. It almost sounded like Caz is aware that Angela and William are attracted to each other.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
    Thank you Beth.
Comment from BethShelby
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The drug dealing bit is a surprise but when he first introduced he had a bad boy image. Maybe not that information is out there, I would think Angela would be quite so interesting but we do at some she dates him for while. It almost sounded like Caz is aware that Angela and William are attracted to each other.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
    Thank you Beth. I?m not sure why your review has come through twice.