For Goodness Sake
I believe in Santa, don't you?5 total reviews
Comment from Daylily
Being our own Santa is an intriguing idea. Matter of fact, we can duplicate him all year long by distributing the gifts of a smile or a helping hand whenever we spot a need.
The Santa inside ourselves spreads joy every opportunity possible and is filled with a loving spirit wishing only good and sweet things for all little girls and boys.
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Being our own Santa is an intriguing idea. Matter of fact, we can duplicate him all year long by distributing the gifts of a smile or a helping hand whenever we spot a need.
The Santa inside ourselves spreads joy every opportunity possible and is filled with a loving spirit wishing only good and sweet things for all little girls and boys.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 10 votes.
Love you original approach.
When you wrote : hasn't got reindeers that land of roofs , I said : no respectable Father Christmas would not own reindeers and sledge.
I enjoyed your poem , I didn't realise the one speaking about Father Christmas was actually the guy himself.
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 10 votes.
Love you original approach.
When you wrote : hasn't got reindeers that land of roofs , I said : no respectable Father Christmas would not own reindeers and sledge.
I enjoyed your poem , I didn't realise the one speaking about Father Christmas was actually the guy himself.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
Comment from Navada
Ha! I enjoyed the lively rhythm and rhyme in this piece and then was totally slayed (or should that be "sleighed"?) by the fantastic twist in your final line! Very enjoyable - good luck for the contest!
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Ha! I enjoyed the lively rhythm and rhyme in this piece and then was totally slayed (or should that be "sleighed"?) by the fantastic twist in your final line! Very enjoyable - good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
Comment from RodG
I truly enjoyed your poem and learning at the end who Santa really is. Your sense of humor peeks out in every stanza, especially stanza two. I think your poem will appeal to all-aged readers. Rod
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I truly enjoyed your poem and learning at the end who Santa really is. Your sense of humor peeks out in every stanza, especially stanza two. I think your poem will appeal to all-aged readers. Rod
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol this is a delightful well written piece of poetry based on the subject of Santa. The rhythm and rhyme scheme are good. I think children would enjoy this although we wouldn't want to ruin their fantasy. Good luck.
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Lol this is a delightful well written piece of poetry based on the subject of Santa. The rhythm and rhyme scheme are good. I think children would enjoy this although we wouldn't want to ruin their fantasy. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023