Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

this is a lovely poem written in 5-7-5 style. I like the idea of seeing "decorous splendour" at the end of an up the hill walk. Congratulations on winning the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023

Thank you, Wendyanne

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Glad to see this winner. I came back to review. Sorry to be so late. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Bill. Just beautiful. Blessings,
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you, Sally

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Nice entry for the upcoming 5-7-5 contest.
I wish you the very best of luck.
Lisa, in cold and a bit rainy weather today.
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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Sorry about the weather.

reply by Lisasview on 04-Dec-2023

Actually been needing rain for quite some time..and now we do not need to water... so that is a plus!!!
Lisa

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I like this prospect of a long walk up the hill and in the snow, but with a glorious view to keep you motivated. I also like the potential and possibilities implicit in the opening line, because "just over the hill" for us readers lies something as yet unexplored and we are curious animals. :) Thanks for the share!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you, Navada

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Lovely picture. Nice poem. I would have used darker font. That's just me. Down here in Texas we never see much snow. We can get slush on occasion, but snow is rare. It is about 65 degrees here. Good work here. Karen

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thanks, Karen

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 04-Dec-2023

Have a good week. Karen

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.

Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good word imagery and presentation.

Good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thank you, Gypsy

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Just over the hill, what a splendid walk you created. The walk was long, and I am sure it was cold, too. So, you had to bundle up to keep warm. God was with you to keep you on your right path.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thank you, Rosemary

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When I see the end of my long walk, I am always excited and if it is in the snow then I look forward to getting home to a warm fire, a fine post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thank you, Dolly

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A stunning image and a few beautiful words make your work a strong contender for the 5-7-5 contest. It is thoughtful and thought-provoking. Well done. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Thank you, Wendy

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I'm glad your walk is ending; it looks pretty chilly out there! But, perhaps you are speaking of your walk through life, in which case there is still much splendor for you to enjoy.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Could be either.

reply by jim vecchio on 03-Dec-2023

I enjoyed your writing. Keep it up!

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023

Imagine the worst and oldest tree is protected by the efficient and deployable forest.

reply by jim vecchio on 03-Dec-2023

And there are still those who would be careless with matches.