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Last day of November

Traumatic

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Comment from Jacob1395
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It must've been horrific, and I'm glad to hear you're okay. I was involved in an accident a couple of years ago, when the spare car tyre from the van in front of me, bounced off and smashed through my windscreen while I was driving on a main road. Thankfully I wasn't hurt, but it was a lucky escape. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
    That must have been scary, I can't even imagine. Thank you for reading my poem, I appreciate it.
Comment from jessizero
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What a horrible event! You used your syllables efficiently, though, and made the event easy to picture. I'm glad you are okay! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
    Thanks so much, I appreciate you reading my poem.