Liberty
Be proud you have freedom.2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the bird and mountain.
-You create a positive mood and have a positive message
about having freedom and putting it to good use.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the bird and mountain.
-You create a positive mood and have a positive message
about having freedom and putting it to good use.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you! I hope I win.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very inspiring 5-7-5 poem with a strong image of flying high with aspiration to fulfil oneself and find ultimate freedom. Thanks for sharing. Very best of luck in the contest! Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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This is a very inspiring 5-7-5 poem with a strong image of flying high with aspiration to fulfil oneself and find ultimate freedom. Thanks for sharing. Very best of luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much!
