Windsong
Music by the wind33 total reviews
Comment from godlucifer
wind of fashion. sound is sound of fashion. the fashion of the wind is the fashion of the sound. play to the tune of the fashion wind. your poem was well written. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
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wind of fashion. sound is sound of fashion. the fashion of the wind is the fashion of the sound. play to the tune of the fashion wind. your poem was well written. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 16-May-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is very nicely done. I like how you maintained the musical sound theme through all of the stanzas.
There was nothing boring about this poem!
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This is very nicely done. I like how you maintained the musical sound theme through all of the stanzas.
There was nothing boring about this poem!
D
Comment Written 16-May-2024
Comment from royowen
Well done with this beautifully written refrain that permeates the great theme of the Windsor that you've written here, you've done a very good Job here Willie, well done, my friend, blessings Roy
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Well done with this beautifully written refrain that permeates the great theme of the Windsor that you've written here, you've done a very good Job here Willie, well done, my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-May-2024
Comment from Laurie Holding
This is just lovely, and I feel like I'm in that little clearing on a cool summer's day. The only constructive criticism I could offer would be to make that font more readable. I find cursive fonts to be beautiful but distracting, and sometimes downright difficult to read. But your words are worth the work. Well done!
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This is just lovely, and I feel like I'm in that little clearing on a cool summer's day. The only constructive criticism I could offer would be to make that font more readable. I find cursive fonts to be beautiful but distracting, and sometimes downright difficult to read. But your words are worth the work. Well done!
Comment Written 15-May-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your description of the wind passing through the leaves, rustling swaying trees, is so vivid, I can almost hear their peaceful, relaxing song. Your well chosen words add a calm and gentle feeling as your poem is read, making it very enjoyable.
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Your description of the wind passing through the leaves, rustling swaying trees, is so vivid, I can almost hear their peaceful, relaxing song. Your well chosen words add a calm and gentle feeling as your poem is read, making it very enjoyable.
Comment Written 15-May-2024
Comment from juliaSjames
I enjoyed the gentle rhythm of your rhymed quatrains. The poem conveyed the soothing quality of the wind in the trees and I could imagine them swaying gracefully.
The wind has so many voices, hasn't it? It can roar or scream, it can whisper or sing a lullaby. Thanks for sharing your own Windsong with us.
Blessings, Julia
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I enjoyed the gentle rhythm of your rhymed quatrains. The poem conveyed the soothing quality of the wind in the trees and I could imagine them swaying gracefully.
The wind has so many voices, hasn't it? It can roar or scream, it can whisper or sing a lullaby. Thanks for sharing your own Windsong with us.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 15-May-2024
Comment from Ulla
Hi Willie, I don't think your poem is too short. It says it all if I may say so. The imagery is wonderful and it just gave me joy when I read it. All the best, Ulla :)))
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Hi Willie, I don't think your poem is too short. It says it all if I may say so. The imagery is wonderful and it just gave me joy when I read it. All the best, Ulla :)))
Comment Written 15-May-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice. The very sound of "windsong" lends a tone of peace and serenity, and ensures that the wind is in this case not to be feared (as it can sometimes be). Nice rhymes and near-rhymes, and a smooth metre. Well done.
Wendy
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Very nice. The very sound of "windsong" lends a tone of peace and serenity, and ensures that the wind is in this case not to be feared (as it can sometimes be). Nice rhymes and near-rhymes, and a smooth metre. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-May-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
I love the term Windsong (it happens to be the name of the perfume I wear sometimes, but I think I like it more because of the name than anything!)
Your poem evokes the soothing sense of natures song sending you into a peaceful sleep. Really lovely!
Julie
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I love the term Windsong (it happens to be the name of the perfume I wear sometimes, but I think I like it more because of the name than anything!)
Your poem evokes the soothing sense of natures song sending you into a peaceful sleep. Really lovely!
Julie
Comment Written 14-May-2024
Comment from Sanku
i understand your take on short lines...This poem was short and sweet and i could feel as if the wind is singing ..'sound of my wind song ' felt a bit odd to me."Listen to my wind song' sounds beautiful but then you have to tweak other lines too..
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i understand your take on short lines...This poem was short and sweet and i could feel as if the wind is singing ..'sound of my wind song ' felt a bit odd to me."Listen to my wind song' sounds beautiful but then you have to tweak other lines too..
Comment Written 14-May-2024