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Poetry Beyond the Ordinary

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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It seems things are not going so well for you. I'm sorry to hear it. I will be sure to pray for you.

Heart broken so,so, many ways. (Heartbroken is one word and space needed here, 'so, so,)

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Thanks again and I think my first text to answer that,
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Comment from prettybluebirds
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Ricky, did things go wrong for you again? You have had such a tragic life that I hate to see more misery added to what you have already borne. I haven't seen any of your writing for some time and was wondering what had become of you. I hope all is well in your life.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Thanks I?m going through the beginning stages of an annulment from an extremely dangerous woman.
    I moved to South Carolina,
    Wasted almost 4 months of my life..
    I? been alone now since December1st.
    Yes, and starting to get myself back together.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
    Thanks and have a wonderful day
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Good luck on the annulment. Certainly does not sound like fun. Quite the opposite really.

Great writing and rhyming. You are a solid talent my friend. D

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
    Thanks again Douglas for your time in review, I?ve been very busy in South Carolina. I?m back in New Jersey working towards an annulment with my marriage of only six months.
    Doctor Ricky