2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "~ Tangled Up In Blue ~"-
9 total reviews
Comment from aryr
What a great poem, 'Tangled Up In Blue', it definitely suits your poem, Gypsy. Oh and the video sparkled with energy. I was enthralled by it. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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What a great poem, 'Tangled Up In Blue', it definitely suits your poem, Gypsy. Oh and the video sparkled with energy. I was enthralled by it. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
i liked the repetition in this - it worked well and and gave it deeper meaning
nice imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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i liked the repetition in this - it worked well and and gave it deeper meaning
nice imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and how well I remember the longing and excitement waiting for your lover to return, in fact I've been experiencing it for 23 years!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and how well I remember the longing and excitement waiting for your lover to return, in fact I've been experiencing it for 23 years!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is another beautiful presentation that includes a music video for our listening pleasure. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed, reading, seeing, and listening.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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This is another beautiful presentation that includes a music video for our listening pleasure. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed, reading, seeing, and listening.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Well, if he's coming back home in the evening, it's all good. He probably will have taken the "piece of the sun" and the "piece of her heart" as that is precious to him.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Well, if he's coming back home in the evening, it's all good. He probably will have taken the "piece of the sun" and the "piece of her heart" as that is precious to him.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful weekend!
Love,
Marival
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You, too! 💖
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Not much better than a great piece of writing and a good song to go with it. I love the color blue and the feelings it evokes while reading the words. Good job you!
Kiwi
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Not much better than a great piece of writing and a good song to go with it. I love the color blue and the feelings it evokes while reading the words. Good job you!
Kiwi
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I don't like but a couple of Bob Dylan songs but that is one of them. This was a poem of balances. For everything natural that is missing or forgotten there is something of you that is missing or forgotten. Very cool. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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I don't like but a couple of Bob Dylan songs but that is one of them. This was a poem of balances. For everything natural that is missing or forgotten there is something of you that is missing or forgotten. Very cool. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Bob Dylan is a legend as a sing writer and poet, in my opinion. He is very eccentric but I like several of his songs. I went to see him in concert in the late 90s and he refused to play his classic songs, he wanted to sing his new ones, so he cut his set short and walked off the stage. I was so mad. I had waited for hours on line to see him.
I love tangled up in blue and knockin' on heaven doors. Blue is my favorite color.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Michael Groover
This poem beautifully captures the serene and harmonious relationship between nature and music, creating a tranquil and almost magical atmosphere. Each stanza contributes to building a vivid, sensory experience of the wind's melody as it interacts with the surroundings.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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This poem beautifully captures the serene and harmonious relationship between nature and music, creating a tranquil and almost magical atmosphere. Each stanza contributes to building a vivid, sensory experience of the wind's melody as it interacts with the surroundings.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jim vecchio
Enjoyed the song by that newcomer, what's his name again? Only kidding! But I'm seriously admiring your words, as usual, and envy the object of your affections. I always can tell one of your poems because the words are so colorful, oh yeah, add your add color to the fonts as well! You are one talented poet!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Enjoyed the song by that newcomer, what's his name again? Only kidding! But I'm seriously admiring your words, as usual, and envy the object of your affections. I always can tell one of your poems because the words are so colorful, oh yeah, add your add color to the fonts as well! You are one talented poet!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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LoL. You got me.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
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Many Blessings to you!