Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter Thirty"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
There's lots of different emotions going on in the different relationships that are sort of dueling a bit with one another. Caz seems to be an issue and of our "friend". What's the big secret? What tangled web do we have going on here? Very good job at bringing up questions and curious to see what happens. Next thank you so much for this great submission having awesome day!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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There's lots of different emotions going on in the different relationships that are sort of dueling a bit with one another. Caz seems to be an issue and of our "friend". What's the big secret? What tangled web do we have going on here? Very good job at bringing up questions and curious to see what happens. Next thank you so much for this great submission having awesome day!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So William has made a play for Angela here and she has rejected him as Caz would be upset. Things sound like they are moving on and we might even find out what this is all about here soon Jacob, another fine chapter, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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So William has made a play for Angela here and she has rejected him as Caz would be upset. Things sound like they are moving on and we might even find out what this is all about here soon Jacob, another fine chapter, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from karenina
Angela is smitten. William is loving the attention. Caz is beginning to sense an extra frisson between the two -- and we know this does not end well for Caz! Perhaps the one with the best instincts was Michelle, after all.
This is getting exciting!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Angela is smitten. William is loving the attention. Caz is beginning to sense an extra frisson between the two -- and we know this does not end well for Caz! Perhaps the one with the best instincts was Michelle, after all.
This is getting exciting!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am really enjoying this backstory. It's all beginning to make sense with the beginning of this novel. We already know William is the father of Rebecca but still don't know what happened to Caz. I can't wait to read more.
'No stop it,' I say (comma after 'No,')
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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I am really enjoying this backstory. It's all beginning to make sense with the beginning of this novel. We already know William is the father of Rebecca but still don't know what happened to Caz. I can't wait to read more.
'No stop it,' I say (comma after 'No,')
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from BethShelby
Angela is very attracted to William and he doesn't mind flirting with her. I wonder if he will cheat on Caz or break up with her in order to go out with Angela. I can't wait to find out what happens to Caz but I think it may be a while before you reveal that.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Angela is very attracted to William and he doesn't mind flirting with her. I wonder if he will cheat on Caz or break up with her in order to go out with Angela. I can't wait to find out what happens to Caz but I think it may be a while before you reveal that.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.