2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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6 total reviews
Comment from aryr
What a great haiku and a great picture, Gypsy. The picture suggested a portrayed China Doll. Your words showed that you cared a great deal, it was a deal with grandma that died. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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What a great haiku and a great picture, Gypsy. The picture suggested a portrayed China Doll. Your words showed that you cared a great deal, it was a deal with grandma that died. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A China doll how beautiful and fragile. I am curious about Grandma. Where did she go and why? Is the doll left on the shelf because Grandma cared for her, or the memory of Grandma? My mind is spinning with possibilities. This is another wonderful presentation that we've come to enjoy from you.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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A China doll how beautiful and fragile. I am curious about Grandma. Where did she go and why? Is the doll left on the shelf because Grandma cared for her, or the memory of Grandma? My mind is spinning with possibilities. This is another wonderful presentation that we've come to enjoy from you.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Haiku are supposed to make you ponder. The grandma is not around to dust her China doll. Maybe she died or she just moved away.... death is most likely to me.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
left as in died? or just went away?
so was grandma the one dusting it?
so many questions and thoughts this brings up
where did grandma go? lol
a great thought-provoking haiku with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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left as in died? or just went away?
so was grandma the one dusting it?
so many questions and thoughts this brings up
where did grandma go? lol
a great thought-provoking haiku with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Haiku is supposed to make you ponder. My job is done. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
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Haiku is supposed to make you ponder. My job is done. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I had to laugh because so many people are creeper out by dolls. My mother had a doll she named Joy. No one in my family wanted it but I couldn't let it wind up in a thrift store. I happen to like dolls but I only put her out on holidays but I do enjoy her. Beautiful but sad . The things we treasure and take care of are future residents of a landfill. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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I had to laugh because so many people are creeper out by dolls. My mother had a doll she named Joy. No one in my family wanted it but I couldn't let it wind up in a thrift store. I happen to like dolls but I only put her out on holidays but I do enjoy her. Beautiful but sad . The things we treasure and take care of are future residents of a landfill. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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My daughter is scared of porcelain dolls and clowns. She thinks they are creepy lol. I don't like those porcelain babies that look dead.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I guess it was the grandmother who kept the pretty things dusted and well cared for. I wonder how many kids today know how to care for something like a porcelain doll. Nicely told story in your poem!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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I guess it was the grandmother who kept the pretty things dusted and well cared for. I wonder how many kids today know how to care for something like a porcelain doll. Nicely told story in your poem!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. Yes, grandma kept her nice and clean.
Love
Marival
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Man this one is so beautifully worded and illustrated! I love the idea of a China doll from Grandma's shelf. Our grand parents used to have some cool stuff didn't they? Perfect format of course and this one has great content. Good luck.
Kiwi
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Man this one is so beautifully worded and illustrated! I love the idea of a China doll from Grandma's shelf. Our grand parents used to have some cool stuff didn't they? Perfect format of course and this one has great content. Good luck.
Kiwi
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs