Colorful Delight
5-7-5 This bird captivates me.23 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lisa,
This is a very good haiku. It shows how even the smallest of thinks can have great beauty and grace. This is a beautiful picture of of hummingbird.
I like the way the last line brings a divine feeling to the poem.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Hi Lisa,
This is a very good haiku. It shows how even the smallest of thinks can have great beauty and grace. This is a beautiful picture of of hummingbird.
I like the way the last line brings a divine feeling to the poem.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 07-Dec-2023
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely and describe the hummingbird as the author states with "uplifting beauty"! I also liked the color scheme the author
used to post this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is awesome! Great Poem, Lisamay!
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The author's words are lovely and describe the hummingbird as the author states with "uplifting beauty"! I also liked the color scheme the author
used to post this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is awesome! Great Poem, Lisamay!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Colorful Delight, has the proper formatting and finds the hummingbird floating like a picture that is too fast for the society it has chosen to visit.
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This 5-7-5, Colorful Delight, has the proper formatting and finds the hummingbird floating like a picture that is too fast for the society it has chosen to visit.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from Daylily
Hummingbirds are little jewels of natural beauty. They are, however, very territorial and are constantly chasing each other away from yard feeders. It is very entertaining to watch them while feeling a great amount of awe.
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Hummingbirds are little jewels of natural beauty. They are, however, very territorial and are constantly chasing each other away from yard feeders. It is very entertaining to watch them while feeling a great amount of awe.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from Pantygynt
You have captured the essentials of the hummingbirds's flight in the three lines this haiku-like poem. It is indeed a captivating sight and one I have only witnessed on screen .
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You have captured the essentials of the hummingbirds's flight in the three lines this haiku-like poem. It is indeed a captivating sight and one I have only witnessed on screen .
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Your words and presentation also captivate this reader. A great entry into the 3 line poetry contest.
This is the first review I did this morning and I am pleased that this one started my day with beauty.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
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Your words and presentation also captivate this reader. A great entry into the 3 line poetry contest.
This is the first review I did this morning and I am pleased that this one started my day with beauty.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful, pleasing presentation Lisa and I enjoyed your uplifting words as these tiny colourful bids are delightful and magical, do you have them in New Zealand? Love Dolly x
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This is a wonderful, pleasing presentation Lisa and I enjoyed your uplifting words as these tiny colourful bids are delightful and magical, do you have them in New Zealand? Love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from poetwatch
Hi Jenny. :) That is a beautiful hummingbird. I have seen them sipping away on the feeder. They dress in different colors and grace my soul with their wonder as they wander the world on little wings. This is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi Jenny. :) That is a beautiful hummingbird. I have seen them sipping away on the feeder. They dress in different colors and grace my soul with their wonder as they wander the world on little wings. This is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
Comment from Deborah Dybowski
I agree. A hummingbird does have an uplifting beauty about it. I always
delight in noticing one. Your poem is beautiful describing a hummingbird as it hovers over the flower. You also have the perfect picture for your poem.
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I agree. A hummingbird does have an uplifting beauty about it. I always
delight in noticing one. Your poem is beautiful describing a hummingbird as it hovers over the flower. You also have the perfect picture for your poem.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Lisa
I love the Hummingbird experience. Such a small creature, yet so hugely fulfilling and beautiful. This is a great three line entry. Good luck with your contest!
Kiwi
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Hi Lisa
I love the Hummingbird experience. Such a small creature, yet so hugely fulfilling and beautiful. This is a great three line entry. Good luck with your contest!
Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023