Me. Her. Him
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
You are such a prolific writer. The minds of writers are so unique and have cool ideas. Your mind is equally unique with a plethora of words to choose from you. I hope your day is amazing!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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You are such a prolific writer. The minds of writers are so unique and have cool ideas. Your mind is equally unique with a plethora of words to choose from you. I hope your day is amazing!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well William has arrived now and we realise that you have set the scene for an event that has a catestrophic affect on Angela in the future and we can't wait to see what happens, another fine chapter Jacob, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Well William has arrived now and we realise that you have set the scene for an event that has a catestrophic affect on Angela in the future and we can't wait to see what happens, another fine chapter Jacob, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from prettybluebirds
The word (girlfriend) is misspelled after the word former (girlfirend). Othar than that, it seems to be perfect. The story keeps getting more intersting as it move forward. Nice work.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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The word (girlfriend) is misspelled after the word former (girlfirend). Othar than that, it seems to be perfect. The story keeps getting more intersting as it move forward. Nice work.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
William seems a little dangerous to me already, especially the way he's looking at Angela. I can't wait to read about what happens next.
I imagine her heads burning. (head's or head is)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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William seems a little dangerous to me already, especially the way he's looking at Angela. I can't wait to read about what happens next.
I imagine her heads burning. (head's or head is)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from karenina
Welcome back to the fray, William! Hmmm. Is Angela suddenly smitten or does she recognize him? Is Michelle aware of some details regarding Caz and William, and only asking questions to throw them off? You've got me guessing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Welcome back to the fray, William! Hmmm. Is Angela suddenly smitten or does she recognize him? Is Michelle aware of some details regarding Caz and William, and only asking questions to throw them off? You've got me guessing!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Welcome...
Comment from BethShelby
We finally meet William and Angela is very attracted to him and he is apparently interested in her. Michelle is in a snit. Caz wants to make getting together a regular thing which is not likely setting well with Midhelle. I wonder who they can afford a place since William and Caz aren't working.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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We finally meet William and Angela is very attracted to him and he is apparently interested in her. Michelle is in a snit. Caz wants to make getting together a regular thing which is not likely setting well with Midhelle. I wonder who they can afford a place since William and Caz aren't working.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you Beth.