Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

What a beautiful image you gave me with this haiku. I enjoyed this.
Great presentation.to match your words.
It is an Enchanting read. So well done.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Exceptional

This is a beautiful haiku - another of my favorites of yours with such lovely imagery. I wish I could write these as effortlessly as you seem to. The personification is great, and the last line is perfect.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I appreciate the congratulation!

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I love the idea of the sun dancing on the water. What a beautiful image. Thank you for sharing that image with me/us. I'm sure the moon doesn't mind. He's a forgiving fellow. LOL

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023

LoL yeah, the moon doesn't mind. (*÷*)

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Likely native Americans would appreciate your Haiku too - sun dancing, moon sleeps, etc. Nicely done! Artwork complements your few well-wriiten poem.

Mark

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a beautiful scene this portrays, wonderful haiku, Gypsy. Your words created that scene. This was brilliant. Your wonderful haiku created such creative beauty with the sounds and smells. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

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reply by aryr on 30-Nov-2023

You are most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This put me in a place. I could hear the water, feel the night breeze and feel the freedom of the moment. This was a quiet yet powerful poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

beautiful imagery in this
love the sun dancing on the water under a sleeping moon

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautiful picture and wonderful personification of our biggest lights in the sky - the sun and the moon! I love seeing the sparkling that the sun creates while dancing on the water!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.

Love

Marival
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Once again, a stunningly beautiful image reflected in this skilfully evocative verse with gentle sounds, warmth and subdued light creating, for me, quite a meditative sensation. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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