Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet natured write about togetherness and love and how our hearts can always mend and forgive, I enjoyed your warm and loving poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2023

Thanks so much, I really appreciate it.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I can see you giving this to your spouse, Poet, on your next anniversary. I like how you introduce the lovers when they first kiss, then show us how the relationship developed. That closing stanza is really nice. Rod

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you for this thoughtful review, I really appreciate it. :)

reply by RodG on 30-Nov-2023

You earned my vote.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A beautifully expressed verse about eternal love. Your verse flows effortlessly with an assured rhyming pattern and tells a story about two hearts bound so evocatively by those silken threads. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This contest is become very competitive. Beautiful poem of your love life, my friend. It's strong, tender, beautifully, written, and illustrated. Sending you my very best day today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest, Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you, it's always nice to hear from you. :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written and rhymed piece for the love poetry contest I wish you the very best friend in the contest. May your day and be blessed.Patricia.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023

Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)