Enhancing Romancing.
I'll Bring You Flowers...3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao ! You have your first vote!
I like the romantic vibe and I'm old school meaning it should be the man , wooing the lass.
Also I can see this man is committed to loving and caring for the lady that has captured his heart.
I think the girl you wrote this love song for will feel cherished.
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Ciao ! You have your first vote!
I like the romantic vibe and I'm old school meaning it should be the man , wooing the lass.
Also I can see this man is committed to loving and caring for the lady that has captured his heart.
I think the girl you wrote this love song for will feel cherished.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed your phone very much, and it does rhyme nicely. I wish you the very best of everything at the contest. Have a wonderful week and enjoy your time with your girl. Patricia.
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I enjoyed your phone very much, and it does rhyme nicely. I wish you the very best of everything at the contest. Have a wonderful week and enjoy your time with your girl. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
Comment from jim vecchio
You hit all the boxes-It rhymes, it's a love poem, and it should be there at the top of the entries. I realize you, as I do sometimes, strive for minimal punctuation, but there needs to be something, perhaps a semicolon, between "I adore you" and "I am for you".
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You hit all the boxes-It rhymes, it's a love poem, and it should be there at the top of the entries. I realize you, as I do sometimes, strive for minimal punctuation, but there needs to be something, perhaps a semicolon, between "I adore you" and "I am for you".
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
