Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem that rhymes for the contest I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest. May God bless you and may you have a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! May God bless you too! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Kristen

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a cute little piece of rhyming poetry although the rhyming of love and dove annoys the hell out of me lol. That's just my personal opinion. Good luck.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you for thinking it cute. The turtle dove was a Christmas reference. It?s a long story. Lol.