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Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Claire this is quite a sad piece of love poetry in which you recount the story of betrayal that you have experienced. There is one typo near the end of the poem, ie, quiet should be quite?? Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Hi Claire this is quite a sad piece of love poetry in which you recount the story of betrayal that you have experienced. There is one typo near the end of the poem, ie, quiet should be quite?? Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Wendyanne, both for your encouragement and pointer. The correction is made
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
What a bittersweet love poem, Claire. You weave the love in and out and then the betrayal and loss. So many have been there and can relate. I like the style of your poem. It sort of lends to an ebb and flow of emotion.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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What a bittersweet love poem, Claire. You weave the love in and out and then the betrayal and loss. So many have been there and can relate. I like the style of your poem. It sort of lends to an ebb and flow of emotion.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Many thanks, Rhonda It still needles forty years down the track, but I got a good bloke in the end
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That's good!
