Comment from Sanku

Excellent

I love this song .The rendition by Justin Timberlake is great!
I am sorry for the man who can not just be free of her influence..The poem is well crafted with all the details of her return journey ..Quite a determined lady,isnt she ?

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I have known males and females who continually allow this type of person back into their lives only to be hurt again. You did a great job writing this. I could feel the emotion.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Exceptional

I LOVE this Jim and thank you for entering the contest. This is great and I love you have her building in your dream to finally reach your home, knock on the door and she is there. What a wonderful concept of a love that is out of reach.

But somehow it seems symbolic of your late wife, as I know how much you miss her. And I love the song by Mary Travers, as I have never seen her without the others before.

Jim this is great, and I have nothing but good to say. And you have no problem with extra blank space here on this one. It was just awesome!!! I love it!!

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

Comment from Daylily

Excellent

When you have strong feelings for someone all you want to do is be with them. It is difficult, however, when the strong feelings are just one-sided. I appreciate you providing the Mary Travers video and I enjoyed watching and listening to it.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Enjoyed your story but feel sorry for the guy. I guess that is the lot of some people to be in relationships like that. Some people just tend to stray from love.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023