In the Dark and the Quiet
Talking and praying to God24 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your choice of onomatopoetic words enhances the environment and spirit. The s's invite quietude and pensiveness. It is a time to recommit. This poem will invite the reader to consider these words.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Your choice of onomatopoetic words enhances the environment and spirit. The s's invite quietude and pensiveness. It is a time to recommit. This poem will invite the reader to consider these words.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Liz. I appreciate how you think the poem is inviting a recommitment. It really is, especially for myself, since I can be inconsistent,lol.
Tina
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***LOL***
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a very strong and solid spiritual piece.
True Dat:
The cross that I carried, God planned from the start,
to make you a way to have a pure heart."
I enjoyed this powerful write.
D
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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This is a very strong and solid spiritual piece.
True Dat:
The cross that I carried, God planned from the start,
to make you a way to have a pure heart."
I enjoyed this powerful write.
D
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from harmony13
Beautiful Poem! The author's words make clear the relationship with
God. Thank you for the author's notes - yes, I agree he is filled with
goodness! The poem flows and connects well. I also liked the title of
this poem. Hi Tina, hope you had a great day! Maria
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Beautiful Poem! The author's words make clear the relationship with
God. Thank you for the author's notes - yes, I agree he is filled with
goodness! The poem flows and connects well. I also liked the title of
this poem. Hi Tina, hope you had a great day! Maria
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Maria for this thoughtful review:)
I hope you have a good day !
Comment from Janet Foor
What a wonderful way to start your day spending time in prayer. It gets us off to a good start that will see us through the ups and downs of the day. However, 3:45 am is a little too early for me. (smile)
Very nicely done.
blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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What a wonderful way to start your day spending time in prayer. It gets us off to a good start that will see us through the ups and downs of the day. However, 3:45 am is a little too early for me. (smile)
Very nicely done.
blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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It's too early for me too! I go with it, to a point, especially if a poem is ready to be written,lol
Comment from jessizero
Your poem was touching and beautiful. It is awe-inspiring to think of all God has done for us. Thank you so very much for sharing these words, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Your poem was touching and beautiful. It is awe-inspiring to think of all God has done for us. Thank you so very much for sharing these words, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing:)
Comment from Wendyanne
Your well written piece of rhyming poetry reflects your very strong faith and trust in God. In the stillness we can truly speak and listen to Him and you have conveyed this message well.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Your well written piece of rhyming poetry reflects your very strong faith and trust in God. In the stillness we can truly speak and listen to Him and you have conveyed this message well.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Yes! Stillness is the best!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Oh Tina, thank you for sharing this intimate, faith-filled moment of stillness in the presence of our Lord. Your faith surely inspired and blessed your words. And we are blessed in the sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Oh Tina, thank you for sharing this intimate, faith-filled moment of stillness in the presence of our Lord. Your faith surely inspired and blessed your words. And we are blessed in the sharing.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me your thoughts! I'm so glad that you can relate to how great God is!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me your thoughts! I'm so glad that you can relate to how great God is!
Comment from Jacob1395
There is a wonderful message in your poem about God's love for us, and particularly in the way how Jesus died for our sins. A well written piece, Tina. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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There is a wonderful message in your poem about God's love for us, and particularly in the way how Jesus died for our sins. A well written piece, Tina. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Jacob! I appreciate your kind words.
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Thank you, Jacob! I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice presentation, Tina, and
your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job setting the scene
in the opening verse.
-Good use of dialogue as Jesus
calls you by name and answers
any doubts that you have.
-Then you respond with your
feelings and thankfulness for
all he has done.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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-Very nice presentation, Tina, and
your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job setting the scene
in the opening verse.
-Good use of dialogue as Jesus
calls you by name and answers
any doubts that you have.
-Then you respond with your
feelings and thankfulness for
all he has done.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you for reading,Pam, And thank you for the thorough review!
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Thank you for reading,Pam, And thank you for the thorough review!
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You are very welcome, Tina.
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This repeated, Tina, so I'm writing something so it deletes. It's nothing you did; it just happens sometimes.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Tina,
This well written poem reminds us about what we should all do more of. In our busy days we need to find quiet time to be with God.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Hi Tina,
This well written poem reminds us about what we should all do more of. In our busy days we need to find quiet time to be with God.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Joan. I'm just learning, at age 60, that I've been missing out over the years in not having More quiet time with God. I will stay healthy if you will! And have a good week:)
Tina
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Yes, age does bring us wisdom, Tina.
I try my best to say healthy.
Joan
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Good to hear, Joan:)
