Too Soon
Fall doesn't last long enough!5 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. I agree with you Fall doesn't last long enough. Your second sentence is very well written. I like your statement, "Away on winged winds.") Good alliteration of the letter w.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I agree with you Fall doesn't last long enough. Your second sentence is very well written. I like your statement, "Away on winged winds.") Good alliteration of the letter w.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your review.
Comment from Navada
It's a fascinating time of year for those of you in the Northern Hemisphere who are juggling autumn and Thanksgiving and Christmas and winter. This is a lovely depiction of that transition. Good luck for the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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It's a fascinating time of year for those of you in the Northern Hemisphere who are juggling autumn and Thanksgiving and Christmas and winter. This is a lovely depiction of that transition. Good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 3-5-3 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. I feel the same way. I love fall and all the pretty colors, but Christmas is my favorite time of the year! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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This is a very beautiful and well written 3-5-3 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. I feel the same way. I love fall and all the pretty colors, but Christmas is my favorite time of the year! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review! All the best to you.
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you are so welcome! blessings, Teri
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Great picture to reflect your mood. Friday I saw even a few houses with Christmas lights.I will slowly put my Christmas decorations up with the tree
being last. Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Great picture to reflect your mood. Friday I saw even a few houses with Christmas lights.I will slowly put my Christmas decorations up with the tree
being last. Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you!!!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review and sweet compliment. All the best to you!
