Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is interesting and humorous. I enjoyed reading it and you followed the contest rules. Your artwork choice enhances your message and good luck in the contest. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great y, Angel. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

Comment from 1Dreamer

Exceptional

Well you certainly made me laugh out loud. Well done - hysterical actually! I laugh because it's difficult sometimes to write what you want, knowing that you may not have a tinker's chance and trying to figure out what will actually score is difficult. Write on! All the best to you.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023

Thank you for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Dreamer. Yes, it's hard to figure what wins on here but it's usually the fluff. Lol. I really appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

Try this next time...

some suckling
baby kittens pray
for more milk

or

flowery
grave sites whispering
"Remember"
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 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023

Hahaaa. That sounds like a winner on here. Lol. Thank you for the hilarious review and stars, Bill.

Comment from Lordinajamjar

Exceptional

I like your sentiment lol.

Sap is what makes the world go round... well this sappy one anyway. LOL

Good luck, I am sure your entry will find some support

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023

Thank you for the fantastic review and big sixer, LordinaJJ. I'll keep my fingers crossed but we'll see. Yes, sap makes this little world go round. That's for sure. I appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked my bit of mockery. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.

Comment from Navada

Excellent

Ah ... yep ... it probably would. :) I understand what you mean. I've watched several of my peers, who are depthful and evocative thinkers, crowded out by fluff. I like this form of protest. I'm with you! :)

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Navada. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.