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Obsession

You're my obsession.

3 total reviews 
Comment from angel123
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I love your artwork choice. It enhances your message about obsession. Your topic is interesting and your poem is well written. Good luck in the contest and best wishes!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-5-3, Obsession, has the proper formatting and notes the tendency to go "all in' when the opportunity to begin a relationship presents itself.....

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Thank you!