2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 143 "~ Little Boy ~"x
8 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sweet! I like your play on the concepts of words! We know that snow can melt in heat but it's the sight of the precious little one who melts the heart of the viewer.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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That's so sweet! I like your play on the concepts of words! We know that snow can melt in heat but it's the sight of the precious little one who melts the heart of the viewer.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you, big sister. I appreciate it.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
aww so cute... this could be senryu or haiku!
never made any myself (don't like lying on the cold ground lol)
but i've heard it's fun from others who have
cute and sweet senryu
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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aww so cute... this could be senryu or haiku!
never made any myself (don't like lying on the cold ground lol)
but i've heard it's fun from others who have
cute and sweet senryu
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!!!! Children acting like children cause smile after smile with me. Life doesn't get much better than that. At least in my opinion. This beautiful presentation expresses that emotion perfectly.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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AMEN!!!! Children acting like children cause smile after smile with me. Life doesn't get much better than that. At least in my opinion. This beautiful presentation expresses that emotion perfectly.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a great senryu, Gypsy. The picture was delightful about the young boy making a snow angel. Your words were amusing in that the young boy was making a snow angel. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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What a great senryu, Gypsy. The picture was delightful about the young boy making a snow angel. Your words were amusing in that the young boy was making a snow angel. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and makes me long for the days when life was so less complicated and you could take pleasure in the simplest of things, before life beats you down
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and makes me long for the days when life was so less complicated and you could take pleasure in the simplest of things, before life beats you down
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I used to love making snow angels with my oldest son. Where my three others were born we just never get more than a light dusting every few years. We learned to make sand angels on the beach. Same concept. It was just as fun. Thank you for this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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I used to love making snow angels with my oldest son. Where my three others were born we just never get more than a light dusting every few years. We learned to make sand angels on the beach. Same concept. It was just as fun. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
We have a marvellous little boy who does the most wonderful spontaneous things I love him deeply, they are so precious, this is a really good post Gypsy, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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We have a marvellous little boy who does the most wonderful spontaneous things I love him deeply, they are so precious, this is a really good post Gypsy, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Pleasure
Comment from patcelaw
I love this little haiku. It brings back to me memories of when I was a child. On the way to school after a snow I would fall into snow bags and make little snow angels. I would carefully get up and when I would go home I'd walk past the snow angels and they would be just the same as they had been when I left them except they might have some animal or animal bird tracks through them. It was always fun. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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I love this little haiku. It brings back to me memories of when I was a child. On the way to school after a snow I would fall into snow bags and make little snow angels. I would carefully get up and when I would go home I'd walk past the snow angels and they would be just the same as they had been when I left them except they might have some animal or animal bird tracks through them. It was always fun. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review!
Gypsy hugs