2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "Coffee on the Porch"-
8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Even in Texas today is a hot tea day. I can't believe it's going to last long, but I could be mistaken. LOL Mother Nature is flaunting her independence here lately. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Even in Texas today is a hot tea day. I can't believe it's going to last long, but I could be mistaken. LOL Mother Nature is flaunting her independence here lately. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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We started to have cool weather, not cold... it's very pleasant in southern California. I'm not trying to rub it in. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful dedication, Gypsy. Your words showed that sometimes a coffee on the porch was all it needed. The picture said it all. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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This was a wonderful dedication, Gypsy. Your words showed that sometimes a coffee on the porch was all it needed. The picture said it all. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
i love walking my dog in chilly mornings then sitting on my patio with a cup of hot chocolate before i start my writing for the day...
this was a wonderfully peaceful gogyohka
nice word choices and a smooth flow through the lines
like the pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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i love walking my dog in chilly mornings then sitting on my patio with a cup of hot chocolate before i start my writing for the day...
this was a wonderfully peaceful gogyohka
nice word choices and a smooth flow through the lines
like the pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
A person who takes two pleasures and puts them together is someone who can be easily made happy. I love to walk through the woods. Give me a cup of coffee and a walk through the woods and I feel like I've had a vacation. Throw in some deer and birds, I'll go to bed smiling. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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A person who takes two pleasures and puts them together is someone who can be easily made happy. I love to walk through the woods. Give me a cup of coffee and a walk through the woods and I feel like I've had a vacation. Throw in some deer and birds, I'll go to bed smiling. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh Gypsy, I will be right there to have that coffee with you, and I best hurry or it will be too late, because at midnight Eastern time, this six star will turn into a pumpkin. However, I do love a pumpkin flavored cappuccino too. Just funning you, but I was waiting to give you my last six star, as I know you always dazzle me with your lovely posts. And I fell asleep and just woke up and thought, oh I wonder if she posted yet. I guess I could have looked at a different one of yours, but I do love this one, and I do love coffee out on the balcony. And as always, you do not disappoint me. Lovely as always. I am hoping to try to get another club one done this week, as I am enjoying your lovely style of poetry so much and had so many compliments on my last one, thanks to you.
Thanks again for another beautiful poem and for you being you. Love ya. Debi
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Oh Gypsy, I will be right there to have that coffee with you, and I best hurry or it will be too late, because at midnight Eastern time, this six star will turn into a pumpkin. However, I do love a pumpkin flavored cappuccino too. Just funning you, but I was waiting to give you my last six star, as I know you always dazzle me with your lovely posts. And I fell asleep and just woke up and thought, oh I wonder if she posted yet. I guess I could have looked at a different one of yours, but I do love this one, and I do love coffee out on the balcony. And as always, you do not disappoint me. Lovely as always. I am hoping to try to get another club one done this week, as I am enjoying your lovely style of poetry so much and had so many compliments on my last one, thanks to you.
Thanks again for another beautiful poem and for you being you. Love ya. Debi
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Debi, you are so sweet. I really appreciate your exceptional six stars review. May you have a wonderful night. Love you too.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Aww. I read your poem and immediately thought of James and then went back up to see your dedication! I remember those bearded lizards that he befriended and he meditates in the morning like that. It's fun how we can recognize someone just with a word portrait!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Aww. I read your poem and immediately thought of James and then went back up to see your dedication! I remember those bearded lizards that he befriended and he meditates in the morning like that. It's fun how we can recognize someone just with a word portrait!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Yes, James has become a friend of mine, his wife, Jade too.
Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it. (*÷*)
Love
Marival
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a wonderful Gogyoka poem. I concur with the sentiment. I love the fresh air so much that I would love to have coffee there morning and night. In the summer, I just sit in my screened porch whole day long working, writing and drinking coffee.
Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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What a wonderful Gogyoka poem. I concur with the sentiment. I love the fresh air so much that I would love to have coffee there morning and night. In the summer, I just sit in my screened porch whole day long working, writing and drinking coffee.
Well done.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from namspoon
The history lesson was a great addition, I spent a few months in an Army Hospital in Yokohama, Japan in 1967 - unfortunately as a patient and not on a vacation. The Graphics are great and one can see the effects of coffee in the words of your poem.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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The history lesson was a great addition, I spent a few months in an Army Hospital in Yokohama, Japan in 1967 - unfortunately as a patient and not on a vacation. The Graphics are great and one can see the effects of coffee in the words of your poem.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for reading my poem. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs