Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you use the refrain of "Touch me" to show that the passion of tender touch still inspires love throughout all the seasons. Great sequence of brief tercets in your love poem!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much Big Sister. I appreciate your wonderful review and helpful feedback.

love,

MariVal

reply by lyenochka on 26-Nov-2023

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Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....and again, one I vaguely recall. However, even my muse has, if you'll pardon the expression, blue-balled me, left for warmer climes!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

LoL

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

sunkissed <-- should be hyphenated sun-kissed

other than that, a great love poem poem for the club's prompt this week

i really liked how you went through all the seasons - ending burning for more in winter

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was one of the most passionate poems I've ever read. It wasn't just physically passionate. It had the deeper passion of soul to soul connection. A really beautiful poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Tis' the seasons' of love... is there any other kind of season, I ask you MariVal, is there?

Each season allows a refined touch, a subtle caress... the power within each and every sensual sense that flows through our blood to the extremities, to the point of actual contact.

Nothing better than contact, touch that lights up one's entire senses.
Sparking, signaling the seasoning, sprinkling seduction throughout the vault of heaven.

Beautiful metaphors, delicious descriptive leads, passionate conclusions... magic use of refrain!

With our thoughts we create...
subliminal leads.

Warmest regards,
James.

******Star scorching!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

James,

As you, so eloquently wrote, the love season is every season 24/7. When I was married to Robert, I was madly in love ALL the time. I thought we were made for each other, forever love, but I was wrong. He was in lust and eventually moved on to the rest.

When I love, I fall 100%. As you know, I'm a romantic passionate woman, that blinded me. Anyway, he was obviously not 'the one' and I'm better without him.

I'm content and happy. My love and passion has transcended to a different kind of passion. It's part of me and treasure it. I'm happy to share it in my writing.

Touch is so important for a healthy life. Many experiments have been done with babies who are touched with love from the get go, and children who are not touch. The first group developed well, and the second group does not. It makes me sad for the second group. Seems like a heartless thing to do. But the results are revealing.

I'm happy you like it. (*÷*)

Con cariņo,

Marival
"your hand touching mine is how galaxies
collide." - Sanober Khan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun walk through the seasons of love with a touch of intimacy throughout, much enjoyed, an ambient poem for all seasons, touch is such a sweet sensation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautifully presented in a well worded poem for the club entry. I wish you the very best weekend, and that you would be blessed by God with all good things that only he can give. Patricia.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed you too, Patricia (*÷*)

Gypsy hugs