One Man's Calling
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Comment from lyenochka
I am really enjoying how Ben and Beth are working together and how you are showing the power of prayer. It's much better than the Marvel super powers. I liked "She swelled herself tall and full. She forced that energy into her prayer." Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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I am really enjoying how Ben and Beth are working together and how you are showing the power of prayer. It's much better than the Marvel super powers. I liked "She swelled herself tall and full. She forced that energy into her prayer." Great job!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Thank you. Your reviews mean so much to me.
And thank you for the fabulous six stars!
Comment from Teri7
Wayne, this is a very well written chapter. You used great descriptive words with great imagery from your words. The artwork you chose goes well with your words. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Wayne, this is a very well written chapter. You used great descriptive words with great imagery from your words. The artwork you chose goes well with your words. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. Your writing renews my faith in God and his works. I do not see any need for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. Your writing renews my faith in God and his works. I do not see any need for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
Makes it all worthwhile!
Comment from BethShelby
I love the way God stepped in and allowed Beth to seen a glowing and her not being afraid that her prayer would be answered. This was a neat way to handle these men. Your last line has a typo. "Gut shot kike he is."
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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I love the way God stepped in and allowed Beth to seen a glowing and her not being afraid that her prayer would be answered. This was a neat way to handle these men. Your last line has a typo. "Gut shot kike he is."
Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
How did that happen???????????? I really don't think it was there (typo) either when I posted, or through all the previous reviews. Grrrrrr.
But thanks for finding it.
Comment from Jim Wile
At first, I thought Ben and Beth would be charged with a crime, but fortunately there were witnesses who saw everything that happened.
I'm sure Beth understood Ben's calling on an intellectual level, but it was gratifying to see her understand it on an emotional level too and to actually participate in it. She was very brave, but I guess she felt the calling at that moment and responded accordingly. This was a very good chapter, Wayne. - Jim
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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At first, I thought Ben and Beth would be charged with a crime, but fortunately there were witnesses who saw everything that happened.
I'm sure Beth understood Ben's calling on an intellectual level, but it was gratifying to see her understand it on an emotional level too and to actually participate in it. She was very brave, but I guess she felt the calling at that moment and responded accordingly. This was a very good chapter, Wayne. - Jim
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
It's all about faith.
Comment from JSD
Excellent, dramatic and compelling writing, once again, Wayne. The power of their faith and of God sings from this action packed piece. I was not scared for a moment. Brilliant!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Excellent, dramatic and compelling writing, once again, Wayne. The power of their faith and of God sings from this action packed piece. I was not scared for a moment. Brilliant!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That was surely a dramatic occasion as the two gunmen were subdued. Perhaps Larabee is done with his bullying if he lives after being gutshot. Isn't this about the time that California had a huge earthquake? Will God send them to help with the rescue and care of the injured?
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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That was surely a dramatic occasion as the two gunmen were subdued. Perhaps Larabee is done with his bullying if he lives after being gutshot. Isn't this about the time that California had a huge earthquake? Will God send them to help with the rescue and care of the injured?
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
The San Francisco earthquake was in 1906. That was why I sent Ben there to preach that 'a storm was coming' and to get D.L.Moody there to preach an 'Awakening'. Ben was led by God, but didn't know that the 'storm' was going to be an earthquake.
Comment from Wendy G
Beth is strong and courageous and is developing a faith similar to Ben's. This chapter reminded me of the children's song "My God is so big, so strong, and so mighty there's nothing my God cannot do ..." Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Beth is strong and courageous and is developing a faith similar to Ben's. This chapter reminded me of the children's song "My God is so big, so strong, and so mighty there's nothing my God cannot do ..." Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your very nice, uplifting review.
Comment from royowen
Wouldnt that be wonderful, God intervening, even when under extreme danger with a gun pointed at you, you can still trust God enough to know you were still sage in God's hands, you've written a great account of what could happen if one believes! Well done Wayne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Wouldnt that be wonderful, God intervening, even when under extreme danger with a gun pointed at you, you can still trust God enough to know you were still sage in God's hands, you've written a great account of what could happen if one believes! Well done Wayne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
Ben's (and now Beth's) faith is of Biblical proportions.
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Absolutely
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I doubt very much anyone being gut shot back in those days could possibly survive that wound. That's a bad one. About as bad as you can get and it would be awful painful, I would think. Gas pains are painful enough. LOL Well done getting Ben
and Beth out of a sticky situation again. No pun intended. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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I doubt very much anyone being gut shot back in those days could possibly survive that wound. That's a bad one. About as bad as you can get and it would be awful painful, I would think. Gas pains are painful enough. LOL Well done getting Ben
and Beth out of a sticky situation again. No pun intended. Nancy:)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
