When The Writing Stops
One Line Poem contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I LOVE this one line poem, reflecting your passion for writing and for the rest of us who are so addicted. Could not agree more with your words. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
  |
I LOVE this one line poem, reflecting your passion for writing and for the rest of us who are so addicted. Could not agree more with your words. Keep writing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
-
Hey, Ginda, hello. Thank you so much for the great review and big sixer. Yes, life would be so less entertaining without writing. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. Have a great day and thank you again.
=]
Ron
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, I think it was heart disease that got that fat little bunny. Probably too much bacon, and he may have smoked too. What can one say about a one-line poem except that it's funny? Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
 |
LOL, I think it was heart disease that got that fat little bunny. Probably too much bacon, and he may have smoked too. What can one say about a one-line poem except that it's funny? Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the great review, Terry. Yes, there's not much one can say about something this ridiculous and short. Lol. I appreciate the stop in, friend. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from Navada
This is a comic and gently reflective approach to the contest prompt! Your choice of accompanying image lends it a sense of cuteness and levity. Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
This is a comic and gently reflective approach to the contest prompt! Your choice of accompanying image lends it a sense of cuteness and levity. Thanks for the share and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the great review, Navada. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
=]
Ron
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I needed a laugh this AM, and your white rabbit filled the bill; it is hysterical. Your words amplify your love of writing and other writers' feelings if they ever stop writing.
Now you have to be here and continue writing for many years to come now that you planted this bunny image in my head.
Mary
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
I needed a laugh this AM, and your white rabbit filled the bill; it is hysterical. Your words amplify your love of writing and other writers' feelings if they ever stop writing.
Now you have to be here and continue writing for many years to come now that you planted this bunny image in my head.
Mary
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Hahaha. Once I came across this bunny video I just had to use it. I laughed out loud when I found it for how perfectly it matched what I wanted to say. Lol. Thank you so much for the great review and stop in, Mary. I'm glad it brightened your day with a little chuckle. We all need a laugh along the way. Have yourself a wonderful Thanksgiving.
=]
Ron
Comment from Lisasview
Well, to begin with the white bunny falling over in front of the computer is really hysterical...and the thought that if your quill ever dries you can be assumed dead is marvelous...and oh so true for many writers...So they will surely relate to your poem.
Lisa
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
Well, to begin with the white bunny falling over in front of the computer is really hysterical...and the thought that if your quill ever dries you can be assumed dead is marvelous...and oh so true for many writers...So they will surely relate to your poem.
Lisa
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the great review, Lisa. When I found this picture I just had to use it. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a fantastic Thanksgiving.
=]
Ron
-
Thank you Ron... You have a nice Thanksgiving as well.
Lisa
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Haha. How true is that! Writing is a life line for me. I can so appreciate this poem because of that. I see no issues with grammar sentence structure esthetics or subject matter. It's a great entry and I wish you best to luck. Hope you're having an awesome night!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
Haha. How true is that! Writing is a life line for me. I can so appreciate this poem because of that. I see no issues with grammar sentence structure esthetics or subject matter. It's a great entry and I wish you best to luck. Hope you're having an awesome night!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the fantastic review, Lea. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a great Thanksgiving.
=]
Ron
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh I love that visual and can't stop watching! Is it real? Your one liner perfectly complements it with humour and fun. The inclusion of a quill and ink is also inspired. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
Oh I love that visual and can't stop watching! Is it real? Your one liner perfectly complements it with humour and fun. The inclusion of a quill and ink is also inspired. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Debbie. I think this little video is of a real rabbit falling asleep. Looks like it to me. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful Thanksgiving and thank you again.
=]
Ron
Comment from royowen
I love this Ron, I haven't used ink, ever since the days of my youth, when there were ink monitors and dark blue stains on the girls pigtails, but I still know what you mean, beautifully written my friend, great job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
I love this Ron, I haven't used ink, ever since the days of my youth, when there were ink monitors and dark blue stains on the girls pigtails, but I still know what you mean, beautifully written my friend, great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Yes, that was a long time ago. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stop in, Roy. I really appreciate it, friend. Have a fantastic Thanksgiving.
=]
Ron
-
Most welcome
Comment from Wendy G
And then we would miss your clever, funny, witty, and sometimes very moving work. Hope your ink well is full. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
And then we would miss your clever, funny, witty, and sometimes very moving work. Hope your ink well is full. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the great review, Wendy. Just being my normal self. Lol. Have yourself a wonderful Thanksgiving.
=]
Ron
Comment from patcelaw
We do hope that your ink well never dries out. I know that there comes a time when we all must leave this planet and I hope that people will know when we have passed. My children are all instructed to contact Fanstory Patricia and let them know if something happens to me.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
|
We do hope that your ink well never dries out. I know that there comes a time when we all must leave this planet and I hope that people will know when we have passed. My children are all instructed to contact Fanstory Patricia and let them know if something happens to me.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the great review, Pat. Hopefully my wife would put something on here if that ever happens. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
=]
Ron
