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2023 Gypsy's Tanka

Viewing comments for Chapter 72 "~ Sunflowers ~"
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7 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is stunning both in presentation and words. Sunflowers in word and pictures brighten any day.
So beautifully written.
This relaxes the heart and soul.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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The two pictures were delightful because they showed a beautiful woman dressed in sunflowers with the second one just the sunflowers, Gypsy. I liked your words because they showed that the sunflowers yearned to be free to follow the sun. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 21-Nov-2023
    You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Sunflowers are such happy flowers, even their name is happy. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us. It lifted me higher just getting to experience it. I enjoyed clicking on your poem.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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never cared for sunflowers... but i like this poem - cool pic of the girl surrounded with her sunny flowers...

nice imagery and smooth flow
and even some rhyme, too!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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We are all kind of like sun flowers in that sense. We yearn for freedom. We turn towards the warmth of the sun. This was awesome. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Gretchen

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much, Gretchen. I'm happy you like it. (*<>*)

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That's the beautiful thing about sunflowers - they just love the sun and follow the arc of the sun's journey. I like the personification you give the flowers here as "yearning" and it makes me think of how those who love God yearn after Him.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
    I'm happy you like it, big sister.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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I like this delightful little poem. It has rhyme and personification. The picture enhances it greatly. The idea follows through of the sunflowers trying to get to the sun. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs