2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "My Eyes Say".
21 total reviews
Comment from Yusita
An amazing write! You sure do have a way with words. Love is a topic written so much about, but you have managed to speak of it in a fresh and creative way that captivates the reader. Write on!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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An amazing write! You sure do have a way with words. Love is a topic written so much about, but you have managed to speak of it in a fresh and creative way that captivates the reader. Write on!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem (*=*)
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The poem is filled with delight. Very romantic. The image is gorgeous, and so colorful when reading your lyrics. How you fill the day with your beauty when you write poetry.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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The poem is filled with delight. Very romantic. The image is gorgeous, and so colorful when reading your lyrics. How you fill the day with your beauty when you write poetry.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning,
I just love love love the images you chose for this exquisite poem...
And your Gypsy Hugs...so darling...
Plus, you are using different font colors which lends a different feeling to your words...and I love it.
Lisa
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Good morning,
I just love love love the images you chose for this exquisite poem...
And your Gypsy Hugs...so darling...
Plus, you are using different font colors which lends a different feeling to your words...and I love it.
Lisa
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is an enchanting and beautiful poem. It is a passionate poem declaring love using all the senses.
I have to give you a six for the beauty of words and presentation.
Best regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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This is an enchanting and beautiful poem. It is a passionate poem declaring love using all the senses.
I have to give you a six for the beauty of words and presentation.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Oh Gypsy, how very beautiful in its passion. An all encompassing love that knows no boundary.
The refrain of 'my' and 'say' add so much to the meaning of every emotion, every action, every need and want. You had my senses peaking, my heart beating and that feeling one gets deep within their lower stomach.
Just stunning MariVal... I keep reading to say this is my favorite, or this is one of my favorite, but I have nothing but favorite... it is complete.
On reading the last line, my mind kept going to suffocate vs die... but only because of the reference to 'air in my lungs' I think.
Just one stunning piece of free verse... in composition, construction and presentation... love it!
You master of seduction!
With our thoughts we create...
the magic of our passion.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Oh Gypsy, how very beautiful in its passion. An all encompassing love that knows no boundary.
The refrain of 'my' and 'say' add so much to the meaning of every emotion, every action, every need and want. You had my senses peaking, my heart beating and that feeling one gets deep within their lower stomach.
Just stunning MariVal... I keep reading to say this is my favorite, or this is one of my favorite, but I have nothing but favorite... it is complete.
On reading the last line, my mind kept going to suffocate vs die... but only because of the reference to 'air in my lungs' I think.
Just one stunning piece of free verse... in composition, construction and presentation... love it!
You master of seduction!
With our thoughts we create...
the magic of our passion.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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James, im so happy to hear from you. It's always a treat to get and read your reviews. You definitely "get me". I'm happy you like this one so much. You are a poet at heart that's why it hits you deeply with in. You know me well enough to know I pour myself onto the page... it comes from deep within. I don't know why it resonates with so many people. I guess they react to its realness... maybe something they have within as well. I know you do.
I did go back and did a few edits... not much but I think it's better. It's good to go back after it sets for a while. Thank you.
May you have a wonderful weekend with your other half. Have I told you the Spanish saying?
"Que encuentres tu media naranja" (may you find your half an orange" hehe
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Con cariño
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Once again you've created another stunning verse, beautifully presented! I love the graduated passion in the font colour while the last stanza is much more measured and in more subdued hues. The quote from Shakespeare perfectly completes the post. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Once again you've created another stunning verse, beautifully presented! I love the graduated passion in the font colour while the last stanza is much more measured and in more subdued hues. The quote from Shakespeare perfectly completes the post. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I got lost on the Pleasure Highway, hit one of them there valleys of which you speak and went careening off the familiar and now I'm trying to walk back, slow going!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I got lost on the Pleasure Highway, hit one of them there valleys of which you speak and went careening off the familiar and now I'm trying to walk back, slow going!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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LoL Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have woven a beautiful sensory poem using eyes, lips, hands, and air in your lungs to pay tribute to your love through the day and night. Your poem is so alluring and elegant, the reader can feel your love. Your artwork is exquisite and makes this an overall stunning presentation.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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You have woven a beautiful sensory poem using eyes, lips, hands, and air in your lungs to pay tribute to your love through the day and night. Your poem is so alluring and elegant, the reader can feel your love. Your artwork is exquisite and makes this an overall stunning presentation.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written, free verse poem that you have presented us with today. I wish for you a very good Thanksgiving and may you have a blessed weekend I wish you the very best also with your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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This is a very well written, free verse poem that you have presented us with today. I wish for you a very good Thanksgiving and may you have a blessed weekend I wish you the very best also with your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful free verse and what beautiful pictures, Gypsy. I liked your graphics, as well. Your words were delightful, they covered almost all of the senses- eyes, lips, hands and generally people. Blessed Be n Hugs!!! ð???ð???ð?§¸
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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What a beautiful free verse and what beautiful pictures, Gypsy. I liked your graphics, as well. Your words were delightful, they covered almost all of the senses- eyes, lips, hands and generally people. Blessed Be n Hugs!!! ð???ð???ð?§¸
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.