Passage
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Comment from tempeste
Ciao,
You now have 5 vote.
That's a lovey wish to bid others.
Shame the majority fall short
Why?
1. people tend to get wrapped up in their own shit , they find it hard to manage their own lives , let alone do they have time to worry about or help others.
2. Many people are self-centred , selfish , envious and they wouldn't think to lend a hand, say a kind word.
Conclusion: We should be are first fan and carer.
Yesterday I told my best friend that she had to stop letting her 3 siblings take advantage of her generous heart
that it was time she took care of herself
seeing she literally has burnt both ends of the candle taking care of their parents.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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Ciao,
You now have 5 vote.
That's a lovey wish to bid others.
Shame the majority fall short
Why?
1. people tend to get wrapped up in their own shit , they find it hard to manage their own lives , let alone do they have time to worry about or help others.
2. Many people are self-centred , selfish , envious and they wouldn't think to lend a hand, say a kind word.
Conclusion: We should be are first fan and carer.
Yesterday I told my best friend that she had to stop letting her 3 siblings take advantage of her generous heart
that it was time she took care of herself
seeing she literally has burnt both ends of the candle taking care of their parents.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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I am burning the candle late tonight. I just finished 'The Exchange', a conversation between father and son. I think you will like it. Hopefully it satisfies the Non-Fiction writing prompt. I will re-read before I release it. And BTW, I am listening to Tina again as she keeps me pumped up. (smile) Thanks for the vote.
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Looking forward to reading it.
Don?t forget to go and sleep ..
Evviva Tina! 🦁
Comment from Daylily
This is a positive request for those we care about in wanting them to be taking good care of themselves. I like the candle analogy being made using just two short lines. This is an excellent posting for the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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This is a positive request for those we care about in wanting them to be taking good care of themselves. I like the candle analogy being made using just two short lines. This is an excellent posting for the writing prompt.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Appreciate your positive review.
Comment from Wendyanne
I like the message you have conveyed in this short piece of poetry. Many people burn the candle at both ends and up becoming unwell. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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I like the message you have conveyed in this short piece of poetry. Many people burn the candle at both ends and up becoming unwell. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Thanks so much
