Moonlit
In the moonlit night2 total reviews
Comment from T.A. Walk
Outstanding! I love these little pieces. So eloquent without much content.
No SPAG critique, well done.
The image is beautiful paired with the piece as well.
Good luck in the contest!
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Outstanding! I love these little pieces. So eloquent without much content.
No SPAG critique, well done.
The image is beautiful paired with the piece as well.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
Comment from JSD
I don't particularly like these one line poems. I just don't think there can be such a thing. But I want to praise your choice of vocabulary again. The opposition of 'crimson' with the moonlight and the image of desire like a rose - all beautifully done.
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I don't particularly like these one line poems. I just don't think there can be such a thing. But I want to praise your choice of vocabulary again. The opposition of 'crimson' with the moonlight and the image of desire like a rose - all beautifully done.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
