Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Rhonda. I believe both Sandra and Ian would be so touched by this. Poetry is an expression of internal emotions and you have such beauty in yours. This is a stunning example of how you feel about Sandra's loss and I'm sure she is deeply touched by your words.

Kiwi

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023

Thank you so much, Kiwi! My heart was in it and definitely gives me an appreciation for the diversity of the work you poets put out!!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

The only way I knew you "weren't much on poetry" was by that admission. Skill-wise, you seem like a seasoned vet.

What a BEAUTIFUL gift this is to Sandra. This is a gorgeous tribute. You're a wonderful friend and very talented poet. Lovely job, Rhonda. xo

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023

Rachelle, that is an enormous compliment, thank you. I dabble in poetry now and then, but usually when there?s something on my heart that can?t be expressed any other way, but besides rhyme, rhythm and syllable count, I?m a novice.
I?m glad I was able to capture my thoughts this way and pass them on to Sandra.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem which succinctly captures Ian's life within these four tercets. Life can be long; made longer by disability. The same way, it can be lived with grace and determination. I sense the latter was the case here. To Ian...

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023

Thank you for your review, Bill! I did try and capture the positive aspects of the man?s life, while acknowledging grief. I know she must be sad.
Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. It's very thoughtful of you to post this on behalf of Sandra's brother Ian.

It's endearing to see others put thought into other peoples greif.

I'm sure she'll appreciate this lovely piece.


-Kerry

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023

Hi Kerry! It was great pleasure to write for Sandra! She?s a dear heart, and grief is grief, and we can all relate to that. I?m sure her heart has been strengthened by all the outpouring of support from all of us!

Take care,
Rhonda

reply by Kerry Foley on 20-Nov-2023

Absolutely, Rhonda. Everyone will endure grief at some point in life, unfortunate, but true.
It was a lovely dedication.

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a very beautiful poetic tribute to Ian who sadly passed away recently. As a 'new' member of Fanstory I can only comment on what I've hear about him and I think your poem probably describes him well

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Hi Wendy. None of us knew him on here, but his sister, Sandra, is a much loved writer on this site. The book is to honor his life for Sandra.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

I think, Rhonda, that you wrote a wonderful poem to the memory of Ian. I know that Sandra will so appreciate it and it will be of great comfort to her. All the best, Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for reviewing, Ulla. I think all our efforts are a comfort to one of our own in need. You wrote a post, too, I believe!

reply by Ulla on 19-Nov-2023

I did write a post as well. Sandra is a dear friend. Xcx

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

My dear friend. Thank you. These words were so much my brother. He was very much loved by so many people, I just have to read all the messages on Facebook. He inspired so many people with his attitude to life. I will miss him daily. Thank you, Rhonda, for capturing my lovely brother. Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

I?m so glad you said that, Sandra. It was very much God inspired. I sat down to write something, and this poem is what flowed out, which I seldom write poetry, so the inspiration had to be divine.

When I read your post I felt I had captured something I understood, but didn?t know. I?m glad it spoke to you, and thank you for the six stars. That?s how I know it hit home.

Love you,
Rhonda

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Your job with this poem and it's from the heart. And that's what means the most. So a gentleman passed and I hope that Debbie and her family are doing well. Your punctuation think it's a fine poem. Thank you you'll show some lovely script and it's aesthetically pleasing too! A great submission I wish you best to luck having awesome day!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for the review, Lea! I know Sandra is going through a rough time. I trust our efforts on this book help.
Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from JSD

Excellent

No need for excuses. This is lovely. So clever. The refrain works beautifully and you subtly and sensitively convey your love to Sandra and her brother. Well done!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, John. Whatever is written from the heart, I believe, come through where needed. I?m just out of my comfort zone with poetry, but couldn?t think of a better way to express my thoughts but through poetry.

Comment from Navada

Excellent

This is a lovely tribute to Ian. I like the simple but effective structure you employed here and the way it enabled you to explore life, love and laughter. I'm sure this will be of great comfort to Sandra.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Nevada. I tried to keep it simple, but meaningful. I appreciate your comments,
Rhonda